Tentative Tango
Lune poem contest (5-3-5)22 total reviews
Comment from LG Wolfe
Well hello Chip, this caught my eye with that great artwork. You have quite brilliantly captured the yin yang relationship of light and dark, blessings and curses, and there's a lot to read into this. Great entry, well done!
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Well hello Chip, this caught my eye with that great artwork. You have quite brilliantly captured the yin yang relationship of light and dark, blessings and curses, and there's a lot to read into this. Great entry, well done!
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thanks, LG!
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My pleasure.
Comment from James W. Reynolds
These short poems are extremely hard to write, but you have done a great job creating a memorable image using just nine words. I really like the concept of blessings and curses dancing together arm in arm.
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These short poems are extremely hard to write, but you have done a great job creating a memorable image using just nine words. I really like the concept of blessings and curses dancing together arm in arm.
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thank you, James!
Comment from patcelaw
A nice lune for the contest. I wish you the very best in the contest. May the rest of your week be blessed with joy, peace and love.
patricia
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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A nice lune for the contest. I wish you the very best in the contest. May the rest of your week be blessed with joy, peace and love.
patricia
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thank you, Patricia!
Comment from Bill Schott
This lune poem, Tentative Tango, has the right set up and suggests one is in a danse macabre and enjoying what can only end badly. This is a tool of the evil one.
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This lune poem, Tentative Tango, has the right set up and suggests one is in a danse macabre and enjoying what can only end badly. This is a tool of the evil one.
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Indeed, Bill- thanks.
Comment from Heather Knight
This is a lovely little poem and the artwork you've chosen to go with it makes it even more interesting.
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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This is a lovely little poem and the artwork you've chosen to go with it makes it even more interesting.
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thank you, Maria Jose.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I liked your sentiments here Chip and your presentation is magical and so true, life is a mixed bag of ups and downs and temptations which sometimes we welcome and some we curse, few words with so much to say here, love Dolly x
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I liked your sentiments here Chip and your presentation is magical and so true, life is a mixed bag of ups and downs and temptations which sometimes we welcome and some we curse, few words with so much to say here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Appreciate it, Dolly!
Comment from Mastery
I wish I had another six stars left for this Lune, Chip. It is very poignant and thought-provoking writing, my friend. Well done and I wish you the best of luck in rthe contest with it. blessings, Bob
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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I wish I had another six stars left for this Lune, Chip. It is very poignant and thought-provoking writing, my friend. Well done and I wish you the best of luck in rthe contest with it. blessings, Bob
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thanks for the kind words, Bob!
Comment from royowen
I just love the finely tuned Lune poem Chip, the artwork says it all, with a pure hearted young damsel dancing the tango with a creature dressed in the garment of lust. Well done, great entry, good luck, blessings Roy ,
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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I just love the finely tuned Lune poem Chip, the artwork says it all, with a pure hearted young damsel dancing the tango with a creature dressed in the garment of lust. Well done, great entry, good luck, blessings Roy ,
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Thanks so much, Roy!
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Most welcome Chip,
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is good chip, very well thought out, and thought provoking. The bible speaks of blessings and cursings being in the power of the tongue. We do entertain both at times and they do seem to walk hand in hand as you've so eloquently stated. I want to stay on the right side and far away from the cursings parts. I want to speak right and be used to speak and do good. I really like what you've done with this Chip and the message conveyed. Well done!
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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This is good chip, very well thought out, and thought provoking. The bible speaks of blessings and cursings being in the power of the tongue. We do entertain both at times and they do seem to walk hand in hand as you've so eloquently stated. I want to stay on the right side and far away from the cursings parts. I want to speak right and be used to speak and do good. I really like what you've done with this Chip and the message conveyed. Well done!
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Hi Jeffrey- thanks for the kind, thoughtful words!
Comment from pome lover
your poem certainly is appropriate for the goings-on today, especially in the world of politics.
I won't go there, but that was my first reaction. It is also applicable to life in general. Very nice! And the perfect accompanying picture.
good job.
pome lover
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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your poem certainly is appropriate for the goings-on today, especially in the world of politics.
I won't go there, but that was my first reaction. It is also applicable to life in general. Very nice! And the perfect accompanying picture.
good job.
pome lover
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Thanks so much, pome lover!