Wilderness Redemption Road
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Comment from robyn corum
Earl,
You sure do leave people wondering a lot with this story. *smile*
I'm glad you made it shorter. Thanks for that.
Some notes:
1.) Smythe settled himself with the thought that wh(a)tever he agreed to didn't matter,
2.) "$150, and you outfit me for the trip with everything
--> I'll just brag a bit, and tell you I'm one of the best bargainers you'll probably ever meet - and I know you DON'T go BACKWARDS on the deal. Did you mean for him to stick at $175 and add the trappings?
3.) Smithers to let me have rent some company tonight.
--> pick one - have or rent
Thanks - I enjoyed!
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reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Earl,
You sure do leave people wondering a lot with this story. *smile*
I'm glad you made it shorter. Thanks for that.
Some notes:
1.) Smythe settled himself with the thought that wh(a)tever he agreed to didn't matter,
2.) "$150, and you outfit me for the trip with everything
--> I'll just brag a bit, and tell you I'm one of the best bargainers you'll probably ever meet - and I know you DON'T go BACKWARDS on the deal. Did you mean for him to stick at $175 and add the trappings?
3.) Smithers to let me have rent some company tonight.
--> pick one - have or rent
Thanks - I enjoyed!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Good catches Robyn. I didn't mean to go backwards in the negotiation. I'm glad you're enjoying it, but what are people wondering about? Thank you for reading and reviewing.
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What Smythe is up to, for one. He's greasy.
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I prefer to think of him as "Slimy."