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Thoughts About Love

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My Collection of Love Poetry

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Comment from rama devi
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Sweet metaphorical love story with clever multi-layers og puns. One spag nit:

He(,) Lune, would beam at her.


Good flash style and flow.
Lovely presentation!

Fun theme. Inspired.

Good luck in the contest.

Warmly,
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 Comment Written 30-Apr-2019

reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
    What a wonderful surprise it was to get your great review, Thank you so much, Rama!
    Hugs,Trisha
reply by rama devi on 30-Apr-2019
    Hugs back!