Animated Stills
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "Lazy Snow"Inspiration of Life from Photographs
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Comment from kiwisteveh
Lovely imagery in this one, begun of course with the super title, 'Lazy Snow' - such a good indicator that it's not planning on going anywhere soon! Thankfully, we don't get snow here, so I'll just enjoy yours from a distance.
There is a nice relaxed feel to the poem, acceptance I guess. The only image that seems maybe out of place is the stalking lion which somehow doesn't match the lazy, lounging nature of the snow.
Nice ending too.
Steve
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019
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Lovely imagery in this one, begun of course with the super title, 'Lazy Snow' - such a good indicator that it's not planning on going anywhere soon! Thankfully, we don't get snow here, so I'll just enjoy yours from a distance.
There is a nice relaxed feel to the poem, acceptance I guess. The only image that seems maybe out of place is the stalking lion which somehow doesn't match the lazy, lounging nature of the snow.
Nice ending too.
Steve
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019
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Thank you Steve, for you fine review and excellent observations.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
This is amazing. Its suppose to be record breaking cold between now and tomorrow. I dont care about records being broken. Not something I really care to achieve. I'm with you. Give me warmth and sunshine.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019
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This is amazing. Its suppose to be record breaking cold between now and tomorrow. I dont care about records being broken. Not something I really care to achieve. I'm with you. Give me warmth and sunshine.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2019
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Thank you Experiencing Liphe, I appreciate your review and comments. Just so our roofs hold up, let it snow.
