Floating Legacies
Bet you never knew, did you?19 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
The magic of color seen through floating bubbles, is a view that no matter what your age, you never tire. I think back sixty-five years ago and think how great blowing bubbles was. Now I watch the wonder in my grandchildren's eyes. The magic is passed on. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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The magic of color seen through floating bubbles, is a view that no matter what your age, you never tire. I think back sixty-five years ago and think how great blowing bubbles was. Now I watch the wonder in my grandchildren's eyes. The magic is passed on. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review, Victor -- have a wonderful week reconstructing some rainbows of your own! :) ;)
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You're welcome, Yvette.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-5-2 syllable poem, Floating Legacies, has the proper formatting and creates a bubbly theme of of loss or simply fanciful observation.
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This 2-5-2 syllable poem, Floating Legacies, has the proper formatting and creates a bubbly theme of of loss or simply fanciful observation.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review, Bill -- have a wonderful week reconstructing some rainbows of your own! :) ;)
Comment from Boogienights
This made me feel happy and the colors....what can I say? I like rainbows. Isn't it amazing what can be created out of so few words. I was in kind of a down mood, but that changed when I read your poem. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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This made me feel happy and the colors....what can I say? I like rainbows. Isn't it amazing what can be created out of so few words. I was in kind of a down mood, but that changed when I read your poem. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review, Boogienights -- glad to have brought a little happiness to your day - Have a wonderful week reconstructing some rainbows of your own! :) ;)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks every drop of rain or water has rainbow or element of rainbow and could only be seen on the sun; just to find it out; well said, well done. Publish works that's readable every day and tomorrows -- DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks every drop of rain or water has rainbow or element of rainbow and could only be seen on the sun; just to find it out; well said, well done. Publish works that's readable every day and tomorrows -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review, DR ALCREATOR -- always appreciated! ;) ;) Have a wonderful week ahead! :)
Comment from Mimi Linny
Wonderful photo to show off the lovely colored 2-5-2 poem on "Bubbles," perfectly paralleling the bursting glow of the remarkable rainbow...slowly fading as it melds its short-lived brilliance back into the clouds. Nicely conceived - and best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Wonderful photo to show off the lovely colored 2-5-2 poem on "Bubbles," perfectly paralleling the bursting glow of the remarkable rainbow...slowly fading as it melds its short-lived brilliance back into the clouds. Nicely conceived - and best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review, Mimi -- be sure to catch a bubble and re-invent your own rainbow! ;) ;) Have a wonderful week ahead! :)
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Oh, this is very original, inventive and creative. These short poems are real challenges but some poets thrive through them and you , FS poet, certainly are one of them.
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Oh, this is very original, inventive and creative. These short poems are real challenges but some poets thrive through them and you , FS poet, certainly are one of them.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review, Donka -- be sure to catch a bubble and re-invent your own rainbow! ;) ;) Have a wonderful week ahead! :)
Comment from Graybærd
Your poem reminds me of a Sesame Street episode I was forced to watch 100 or so odd times. Don't worry. It was the bubble episode.
I love the comparison of bubbles to rainbows and their combination of colors.
Well done.
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Your poem reminds me of a Sesame Street episode I was forced to watch 100 or so odd times. Don't worry. It was the bubble episode.
I love the comparison of bubbles to rainbows and their combination of colors.
Well done.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review, Greybaerd -- be sure to catch a bubble and re-invent your own rainbow! ;) ;) Have a wonderful week ahead! :)
Comment from kiwisteveh
A rather neat 2-5-2 poem and beautiful presentation.
'spry' gave me pause - I associate that word with quickness and agility, neither of which seem particularly appropriate for bubbles. I did consider it might have been a typo for 'spray' but that doesn't really fit any better.
Anyway, five stars for the clever use of the title and the connection between bubbles and rainbows.
Good luck.
Steve
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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A rather neat 2-5-2 poem and beautiful presentation.
'spry' gave me pause - I associate that word with quickness and agility, neither of which seem particularly appropriate for bubbles. I did consider it might have been a typo for 'spray' but that doesn't really fit any better.
Anyway, five stars for the clever use of the title and the connection between bubbles and rainbows.
Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review, Steve -- look at it again. ;) :) Have a great week! ;)
Comment from phil nelson
very clever--and I'm glad that I now know! This certainly meets the contest requirements in a very positive way, and leaves the reader with pleasant thoughts! Very enjoyable. Good luck in the contest!
All the Best!
Phil
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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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very clever--and I'm glad that I now know! This certainly meets the contest requirements in a very positive way, and leaves the reader with pleasant thoughts! Very enjoyable. Good luck in the contest!
All the Best!
Phil
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Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your delightful review, Phil - much appreciated! ;) Have a colorful week of rainbows! ;)
