Comment from meeshu

Excellent

awesome word and a cute story to go with it. it has to be the moon that is making everybody write about murder. yours is the fourth tonight, CD.............meeshu

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 Comment Written 22-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018

Haha... or perhaps people are getting in early for Halloween? Thanks, Meeshu :)

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi Craig. I have always thought that fuels are so stupid. No woman with maybe an exception or two would challenge another woman to a dual. Women can control anger better, I suppose. I did not know the word. Great job. "Off your face" must be an Aussie expression. What does it mean? Thank you for sharing

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 Comment Written 22-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2018

Hi Pam, thanks for the great review. "Off your face" means out of control, and with little grip on reality - typically induced by drugs or alcohol. Maybe I need to add an author note?

Cheers, Craig

reply by Pamusart on 22-Sep-2018

Maybe. Merlin?s do not use that phrase.