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~ His Final Breath ~

Short Poem

11 total reviews 
Comment from LynnetteOK
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First of all, let me tell you I'm sorry for your loss. The weight of losing a parent is heavy indeed, sometimes overwhelming.
This is a very well written expression of that. Your choice of picture is perfect.
Best of luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 04-Sep-2018

reply by the author on 04-Sep-2018
    Lynnette, I appreciate you taking the time to review my short sad poem and for your compassionate words. Thank you kindly. xx