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Dolly'sPoems
I haven't heard the word 'necking' since I was a teenager, he he he. You introduced a new word here and your tale flowed like a dream and was a joy to read, a sad end for the two lovers though! He he he, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 17-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2018
Ha! Thanks for the lovely review, Dolly. It didn't occur to me I might need to put in a footnote for "necking". I have now :) Cheers, Craig