A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem about the clock watcher. I have to admit I used to be a really bad clock watcher when I worked a 9 to 5 job. You used very good words and the art work went well with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 31-May-2018
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This is a very well written poem about the clock watcher. I have to admit I used to be a really bad clock watcher when I worked a 9 to 5 job. You used very good words and the art work went well with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 31-May-2018
reply by the author on 31-May-2018
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Thanks very much for the lovely comments, Teri. I think, for me, the clock watching depends on the job. If it's one that isn't much fun, then the day drags, and the clock gets a lot of attention. If it's something I enjoy, not so much :) Cheers, Craig
Comment from tfawcus
Nicely drawn together at the end with your word of the day being so intricately bound up in the alliteration! "That torpid tell-clock type" is a great turn of phrase. It reminds me of one or two civil servants that I have known!
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reply by the author on 31-May-2018
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Nicely drawn together at the end with your word of the day being so intricately bound up in the alliteration! "That torpid tell-clock type" is a great turn of phrase. It reminds me of one or two civil servants that I have known!
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Comment Written 31-May-2018
reply by the author on 31-May-2018
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I think we've all known someone like that! Many thanks, Tony - Craig
Comment from Ann Tran
Thank you for penning this CD Richards. It was a lovely read and motivating to have a mentality of making the most of everyday since it's fresh and new.
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Thank you for penning this CD Richards. It was a lovely read and motivating to have a mentality of making the most of everyday since it's fresh and new.
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Comment Written 31-May-2018
reply by the author on 31-May-2018
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Thank you very much for the kind words, Ann. They are greatly appreciated - Craig