Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A clever well rhymed write with great flow and sentiments,
my favourite stanza is:

Perhaps it suits oppressive folk
to make us think we're full of sin;
by making us heed their advice
the outcome is, we lose, they win.

So true! Love Dolly x


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 Comment Written 07-May-2018

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reply by the author on 07-May-2018

Thanks so much for the lovely, supportive comments, Dolly. I really appreciate the review :) Craig

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi Craig,

Good use of your word of the day here. good overall piece too. The idea of having to atone for something thousands of years ago brings new meaning to holding a grudge.

I also struggle with the murderer, rapist or whatever who repents gets into heaven but a good man who did seldom but good deeds gets to burn in hell for exercising their apparently God-given right...

G

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 Comment Written 07-May-2018

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reply by the author on 07-May-2018

Re grudges- it certainly does, G. And yes, it's funny how we are told we can't possibly be moral without God, but his idea of morality seems just a little off-kilter to me. Many thanks for a great review - Craig