April NaPoWriMo NationalPoetcontest
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "I'm Glad You Are My Mother"Daily poems for April 2018
42 total reviews
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, an exceptional feat, this stunning poem and your 29 others. I appreciate your gift, this one is special indeed - its rhyme and rhythm so smooth and easy in flow, it's such a pleasure to read - certainly a tribute to all you hold dear and a poem they will enjoy reading to be sure...
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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In my opinion, an exceptional feat, this stunning poem and your 29 others. I appreciate your gift, this one is special indeed - its rhyme and rhythm so smooth and easy in flow, it's such a pleasure to read - certainly a tribute to all you hold dear and a poem they will enjoy reading to be sure...
Comment Written 01-May-2018
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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Hi Eve. Thank ypu very much for ypu lovely review and six stars and ai left this until last and do hold all my family and friends in high regard and will give this to amy Mum on Mothers Day. This is a preview version Lovely to hear from you Cheers Christine PS Sorry for the late reply
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Please don't concern yourself about replying immediately - we all have busy lives, and the fact you were still able to complete 30 poems in 30 days is both impressive and eviable. You are very welcome, Christine, my pleasure and definitely my congrats for your accomplishment - although I do try to write daily, it is a challenge which I am usually unable to complete. Again, my congrats...Eve
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Chrissy710, A poem of love. You are a lucky woman to have to many people in your life, and all those people are lucky to have you, a woman who expresses her thoughts of love. a poem from the heart, beautifully penned, and a pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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Hello Chrissy710, A poem of love. You are a lucky woman to have to many people in your life, and all those people are lucky to have you, a woman who expresses her thoughts of love. a poem from the heart, beautifully penned, and a pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 01-May-2018
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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Hi Late Bloomer, Yes I am a very luck woman and I thought my last April poem was for them Thank you reviewing my poem and for you lovely commets Cheers Christine
Comment from Gloria ....
So beautiful, Christine. I can see how your father's influence on your poetry still shines through, at least I imagine it that way.
A most heartfelt tribute to your mother, and I wish you all the best in the voting booth on this most challenging project.
Superb! I hope you don't return to only posting once a week though.
Gloria
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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So beautiful, Christine. I can see how your father's influence on your poetry still shines through, at least I imagine it that way.
A most heartfelt tribute to your mother, and I wish you all the best in the voting booth on this most challenging project.
Superb! I hope you don't return to only posting once a week though.
Gloria
Comment Written 01-May-2018
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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Hi Gloria, Thank you so much for your review and thanks for your best wishes .I need a little break but we shall see Cheers Christine
Comment from Heather Knight
Lovely poem and notes, Christine. Very moving.
I love my mum, but unfortunately she has dementia and even though she still knows me perfectly she's like a little girl. My dad passed away 20 years ago.
My husband and my three children are my whole world.
I have one sister, but even though we used to be very close, we hardly ever talk now.
Thanks for sharing and congratulations on finishing the challenge. I was only able to write a few poems as I don't have enough time.
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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Lovely poem and notes, Christine. Very moving.
I love my mum, but unfortunately she has dementia and even though she still knows me perfectly she's like a little girl. My dad passed away 20 years ago.
My husband and my three children are my whole world.
I have one sister, but even though we used to be very close, we hardly ever talk now.
Thanks for sharing and congratulations on finishing the challenge. I was only able to write a few poems as I don't have enough time.
Comment Written 01-May-2018
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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Hi Maria, Thank you very much for this lovely review and six stars for my family. At least you tried in the challenge that what counts I dont expect to win as there are so many good poets in this Cheers Christine
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I didn't even know there was a prize...
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is a lovely poem, Chrissy, a tribute to everyone is your life. You really have been blessed with wonderful family and friends. I'm sure they feel the same for you. I wish I still had my mother with me, and my father, but I'm sure they will be waiting for me when it's my time. Enjoy them all for as long as you can, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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That is a lovely poem, Chrissy, a tribute to everyone is your life. You really have been blessed with wonderful family and friends. I'm sure they feel the same for you. I wish I still had my mother with me, and my father, but I'm sure they will be waiting for me when it's my time. Enjoy them all for as long as you can, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 01-May-2018
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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Hi Sandra, Thank so much and yes I am lucky to have Mum I will gove this to her for Mothers day Cheers My friend Christine. ( How is the next book going awaiting its publication )
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It's finished, but now it's being edited. Thanks for asking, Christine. :) I'm excited and nervous at the same time! lol. xxxxx
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Great I look forward getting on my I book Cheers Chrstine
Comment from happykat4
I enjoyed your poem from beginning to very end. I can and do relate to everything that is said. You write from your heart and this reader has strong positive reaction to these posts and their poetry. I happen to think poetry is meant to be shared in this way. Thank you for sharing your poem. Kat
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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I enjoyed your poem from beginning to very end. I can and do relate to everything that is said. You write from your heart and this reader has strong positive reaction to these posts and their poetry. I happen to think poetry is meant to be shared in this way. Thank you for sharing your poem. Kat
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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Hi Kat, Thank you and most of my writing is from the heard I try to be true to my feeling with my work and glad to share especially this one I am so lucky Cheers Christine
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Your wonderful verse is a lovely tribute to you mother and all of the important people in your life.
Well written and well told.
Thank you for sharing this lovely piece with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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Your wonderful verse is a lovely tribute to you mother and all of the important people in your life.
Well written and well told.
Thank you for sharing this lovely piece with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 01-May-2018
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Hi Sharon, Thank again and yes I am fortunate to have my Mum and enjoy her company very much and I have many other important people who share my heart. Now finished Phew I can now begin to catch up with others work Cheers for your great support Christine
Comment from mvbrooks
What a great way to end an April writing challenge with a poem befitting of the upcoming May's Mother's Day. This poem is specific enough to be a tribute to you own mother and universal enough for Hallmark to come calling.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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What a great way to end an April writing challenge with a poem befitting of the upcoming May's Mother's Day. This poem is specific enough to be a tribute to you own mother and universal enough for Hallmark to come calling.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Oh mybrooks Thank you for your lovely comments And yes I will give it to my Mum for Mothers day This is a preview for my FS family Cheers Christine
Comment from Artasylum
Like you suggested this is a beautiful frame for the NapPoWriMo write. It is loving, kind, grateful, joyful and all of the adjectives that express love of Mother, family and friend too. yours, diana
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Like you suggested this is a beautiful frame for the NapPoWriMo write. It is loving, kind, grateful, joyful and all of the adjectives that express love of Mother, family and friend too. yours, diana
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Hi Diana Thank you for you review and I enjoyed writing this one for the last of my challlenge for April I have a wonderful life so lucky Cheers Christine
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Great job!
Comment from Susan B. Lamphier
What a wonderful, warm woman you must be, Christine. You write so well about your love for your family. I've enjoyed this NaNoWriMo challenge with you. I maybe short on the poem quantity, but I have learned so much, and met a lovely person as yourself. Thank you!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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What a wonderful, warm woman you must be, Christine. You write so well about your love for your family. I've enjoyed this NaNoWriMo challenge with you. I maybe short on the poem quantity, but I have learned so much, and met a lovely person as yourself. Thank you!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2018
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Hi Susan, Thank you and I hope so. I love my life and all in it and I also am pleased and honoured to have met you I hope we share many more messages Cheers Christine