Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello, this is a bit of a journey from silly to serious, but I do like the message of the poem and found it very candid and truthful, and at the end of the day, it is about the choices you make, or don't make. I saw no errors and thanks for sharing your well-written poem, Chrissy, Ana.

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 Comment Written 26-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018

Hi Ana, Thanks for reading and I had also posted a silly poem Sammy Snail before this one so that was the reference to silly bit of course unless you saw that one my autors notes are a bit ambigious LOL Cheers Christine and yes choice is ours to make

Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

Very true to heart this is. I totally agree, take me as I am or leave me be. Serious enough this is, but silly too. A fun free verse and story in a poem. I love the picture too. Sherman541

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 Comment Written 26-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2018

Hi Sherman541. Thank you for reading this poem I am sorry but I meant my last post Sammy Snail as silly and this one serious but unless you read that one my authors notes are a bit odd LOL I loved the picture also Ha Ha Cheers Christine

reply by Sherman541 on 27-Apr-2018

you are welcome. - I am sorry I got my wires crossed, but remember everyone sees things different still a great poem