Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

This is very fun, cute, and lighthearted. You've addressed something in this poem that happens a lot in families. I like the message and how at the end, mum put all of them down. I enjoyed this Chrissy! Well done.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018

Hi Jeffrey, Yes it was written with tongue in cheek ( mainly LOL ) Couldn't resist the ladt line Ha Ha I love my kids with all my heart but sometimes Hmmmm Cheers Christine

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very good, great job on this, I remember some times between my brother and I. Nicely done with great rhyming, reads well. Thanks for the share and have a great day

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018

Hi William, Lovely to hear from you and I think this may bring some memories for many LOL you too have a great day Many Cheers for your time Cheers Christine

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I have been blessed as a parent not to have such rivalry among my children (probably because there are only two). I can see how the bickering would drive Mom batty as well as hurt her feelings. Love the surprise ending.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2018

Hi Rod, Thank so much and at times they would drive me batty bit I always treated them equally despite what they thought. I thought the last line finished this off well Tongue in cheek of course Cheers Christine

Comment from Bridget Myer

Excellent

Unlike this piece the rhyming and the meaning how true it seems to those involved.
Sibling Rivalry is what makes the world go around and how we develop a little resilience in life.
As a mum it is true you will love your children differently, and yes sure at times it will be a case of loving one more for a time...but what goes around comes around.
Again I loved this heartfelt piece. as a receiver and as a giver. Well done

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 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

Hi Brigette, Thank you and glad you didn't think my last line was true,far from it but sometimes they drive me mad but I love them equally and they know it but it is a bit like a competition of who can outdo who Ha ha Cheers for your review Christine

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Yep. I was one of nine children. I always was asking who she loved the most. She definitely favored the boys and a particular brother. We all knew he was destined for success. He is a self made multi millionaire and a very decent and caring person. Thank you for sharing. Nine more days

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 Comment Written 22-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018

Hi pam. wow a big family and what fun you would have had with this issue. Sounds like your brother has done well I sure you all have. I truly do not have a favourite but keep them thinking Ha ha Cheers Christine ( yes 9 more days not counting and trying to keep up so far behind though in reviews) Cheers Christine