April NaPoWriMo NationalPoetcontest
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Head above water"Daily poems for April 2018
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Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Christine. I think your "running as fast as you can" poem--or in this case "composing and posting as fast as I can" resonates with all of us in the NaPoWriMo as well as keeping up with reviewing. Still--we like to participate every year. I enjoyed this post--keep going. Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Hi Christine. I think your "running as fast as you can" poem--or in this case "composing and posting as fast as I can" resonates with all of us in the NaPoWriMo as well as keeping up with reviewing. Still--we like to participate every year. I enjoyed this post--keep going. Marilyn
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Hi Marilyn Thank you and I feel so bad I am so far behind in reviews etc but I promise to catch up. Yes this is a fun challenge and I am determined to finish it with 30 poems. As always hugs Cheers Christine x
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Thanks for sharing this fun verse.
I agree, it's hard to get it all done when life is so busy.
But, here we are, persevering.
Well done and well said.
Sharon
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Thanks for sharing this fun verse.
I agree, it's hard to get it all done when life is so busy.
But, here we are, persevering.
Well done and well said.
Sharon
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Hi Sharon, Thanks for reading my poem and I haven't drowned yet LOL but will keep going dog paddle is a fun stroke Cheers Christine hang in there
Comment from aryr
You do very well, Christine. One thing I have learned over the years and it did take several years for me to learn this, and that is to deal with the important tasks first, you know the ones that life may depend on-like making meals, housework etc. Then approach the ones for others-like the job; but and this one is important- always make time for you-even if it is just 15 minutes a day but an hour is better. This was well done, it was honest, it was catchy and interesting. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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You do very well, Christine. One thing I have learned over the years and it did take several years for me to learn this, and that is to deal with the important tasks first, you know the ones that life may depend on-like making meals, housework etc. Then approach the ones for others-like the job; but and this one is important- always make time for you-even if it is just 15 minutes a day but an hour is better. This was well done, it was honest, it was catchy and interesting. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Hi Ary, thanks reading and for your lovely support it is reviews like you that keep me going so hugs to you and I am not to far behind and will catch up and it is all about priorities Cheers Christine
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You are most welcome Christine.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem and SOS. Sometimes we feel overwhelmed with all the reviews and writing and searching for material to write about. Try to stay aboard even if you only write a three line poem for a few days. When you fall behind it will be hard to catch up again. Reviews come second.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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A very well-written poem and SOS. Sometimes we feel overwhelmed with all the reviews and writing and searching for material to write about. Try to stay aboard even if you only write a three line poem for a few days. When you fall behind it will be hard to catch up again. Reviews come second.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Hi Sandra, Thank you and this was written with tongue in Cheek, well I had to write something LOL I am staying afloat and will catch up . The review are difficult to get to also but I want to read everyone work Cheers Christine
Comment from Ogden
Yes, it's most important to run ahead of the oncoming tide, making sure your head stays above water.
And now look here! Keep me out of this! You know as well as I do, you fibbed when you claimed you're writing your stuff for me. You chose to get involved with this demanding NapoRiMo business. Take a bite, spit something out, take another one, see what comes out, day after day. I can't accept the responsibility.
I'm just a rubbernecker in these parts, sticking around just long enough to view the wreckage, and pick up a few coins.
Okay, I confess I haven't completely leveled with you, Christine.
I go off like this every once in a while, so disregard everything i said, except for the parts I meant.
I'll give you this much - I really like the last lines of your final stanza:
"I'll finish this, but have to start
The next one now compose.
They say that writing is an art
Free style or rhyming prose?"
(I kinda liked your poem.)
Don (Ogden)
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Yes, it's most important to run ahead of the oncoming tide, making sure your head stays above water.
And now look here! Keep me out of this! You know as well as I do, you fibbed when you claimed you're writing your stuff for me. You chose to get involved with this demanding NapoRiMo business. Take a bite, spit something out, take another one, see what comes out, day after day. I can't accept the responsibility.
I'm just a rubbernecker in these parts, sticking around just long enough to view the wreckage, and pick up a few coins.
Okay, I confess I haven't completely leveled with you, Christine.
I go off like this every once in a while, so disregard everything i said, except for the parts I meant.
I'll give you this much - I really like the last lines of your final stanza:
"I'll finish this, but have to start
The next one now compose.
They say that writing is an art
Free style or rhyming prose?"
(I kinda liked your poem.)
Don (Ogden)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Hi Don Ha Ha Thank you for you review I did chuckle at it and I am glad you' kinda' liked my poem, more to come so keep that neck stretched Cheers Christine
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Okay, you're welcome, Christine, but please stay out of the water next time, and don't make me think so much anymore. The pay is lousy around here, mate.
Don
Comment from Bucketlist
I can certainly relate
I do procrastinate
I'm slow which I've come to hate
It takes me a while to participate
A poem per day is the difficult way
To keep author stress at bay
I've found an apple each day
Keeps the anxiety doctor away
Loved your poem
Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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I can certainly relate
I do procrastinate
I'm slow which I've come to hate
It takes me a while to participate
A poem per day is the difficult way
To keep author stress at bay
I've found an apple each day
Keeps the anxiety doctor away
Loved your poem
Hugs, Trisha
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Hi Trisha, Thanks for your review and love your poem Keeping eating those apples LOL Well done you could post this one Your support is very appreciated and hugs back Cheers Christinee
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Maybe I will, thanks, you are welcome, and bottoms up!
Comment from Pamusart
What day is this Christine? Is this your 13th poem of April? It is Friday, the 13th. I have so many poems in reserve since I am new to the site that I woukd not have to even write new ones. Below is my favorite stanza of this one. Happy Writing! Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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What day is this Christine? Is this your 13th poem of April? It is Friday, the 13th. I have so many poems in reserve since I am new to the site that I woukd not have to even write new ones. Below is my favorite stanza of this one. Happy Writing! Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Hi Pam, Thanks very much for your review and No not the 13th I am working on that one only 2 behind I think LOL I need to have some in reserve I think I can find one ot two but new thoughts keep popping into my head Cheers Christine
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about writing, as writing is an art, writing blocks are natural and evident but a writer has to continue writing and keeping filled in with words; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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This speaks about writing, as writing is an art, writing blocks are natural and evident but a writer has to continue writing and keeping filled in with words; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Hi DR ALCREATOR, Thanks again for your review and it is not so much writers block rather not enough hours in a day LOL still I will keep going Cheers Christine
Comment from karenina
Love it here, I truly do....but I never allow it to feel like work. I hardly think Frost, Whitman, Dickinson or Plath were driven to write a poem a day.... it is counter intuitive to the very nature of art! I know, I get that many pledged a poem a day for this month. Still. If you wrote three three d a us from now when you were bursting with inspiration would that not be better than "finding it challenging to write every day, review and reply also."???? Tale breath! Enjoy the art!
Karenina
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Love it here, I truly do....but I never allow it to feel like work. I hardly think Frost, Whitman, Dickinson or Plath were driven to write a poem a day.... it is counter intuitive to the very nature of art! I know, I get that many pledged a poem a day for this month. Still. If you wrote three three d a us from now when you were bursting with inspiration would that not be better than "finding it challenging to write every day, review and reply also."???? Tale breath! Enjoy the art!
Karenina
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Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Hi Karenina Thank you very much and no it is not work to me either I love it and wish I had all day to just write and read but I do have to earn a living so I write after work to relax Many Cheers Christine Breathing in now LOL
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello Chrissy, well this poem speaks for itself, really, a busy poem about a busy life. It is the modern world we live in. I am on holidays, so it is nice at the moment, but when I get back to work, I don't think I'll be here. Thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Hello Chrissy, well this poem speaks for itself, really, a busy poem about a busy life. It is the modern world we live in. I am on holidays, so it is nice at the moment, but when I get back to work, I don't think I'll be here. Thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
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Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Hi Ana, Thank you for your review and yes I think many of us lead pretty busy lives so enjoy your holiday Many Cheers hope you are relaxing Cheers Christine