April NaPoWriMo NationalPoetcontest
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Rainbow Bright"Daily poems for April 2018
19 total reviews
Comment from meeshu
a pleasant poem, beautifully written. a little rain is more enjoyable when
accompanied by a rainbow. well rhymed, I like asses/best. good luck
in the challenge, Christine.......meeshu
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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a pleasant poem, beautifully written. a little rain is more enjoyable when
accompanied by a rainbow. well rhymed, I like asses/best. good luck
in the challenge, Christine.......meeshu
Comment Written 10-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Hi Meesu Thank you forcypur review and great support it is lovely and the rainbows were lovely Cheers Christine
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about your life and work. I think your students do their best every day to impress you for the way you treat them I am sure they live to please you.
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A very well-written poem about your life and work. I think your students do their best every day to impress you for the way you treat them I am sure they live to please you.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Hi Sandra How lpvely ro receive you 6 stars to go with my rainbow Many Cheers and yes it is a great job Christine
Comment from aryr
Very well done Christine, it is a wonderful tribute to both nursing students and the instructors. I enjoyed the way you indicated a typical day and the fact that you remembered the praise. Sometimes the praise alone can make or break a day. very much appreciated and enjoyed. Nice rhyme pattern. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Very well done Christine, it is a wonderful tribute to both nursing students and the instructors. I enjoyed the way you indicated a typical day and the fact that you remembered the praise. Sometimes the praise alone can make or break a day. very much appreciated and enjoyed. Nice rhyme pattern. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Hi Ary Thank you and ues ai always give my students feedback and encouragement it does fo a long way and in thos world not often done Cheers Christine
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You are so welcome Christine.
Comment from damommy
Your cheery poem flowed right along with good meter and rhyme.
Your days are so busy, but I can tell you love it. What a way to start the day, seeing a rainbow.
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Your cheery poem flowed right along with good meter and rhyme.
Your days are so busy, but I can tell you love it. What a way to start the day, seeing a rainbow.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2018
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hi Yvonne Yes it is bisy but enjoyable and ai like to sahee my nursing knowledge with them Cheers for your review Chrsitine
Comment from Bridget Myer
Christine, the imagery within this piece was uplifting and pleasing.
The ability to draw me into the piece was refreshing and encompassing, I could almost feel me walking beside you.
The rhyming within the stanzas was refreshing and well placed.
Thank you for sharing your Rainbow Bright with me
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Christine, the imagery within this piece was uplifting and pleasing.
The ability to draw me into the piece was refreshing and encompassing, I could almost feel me walking beside you.
The rhyming within the stanzas was refreshing and well placed.
Thank you for sharing your Rainbow Bright with me
Comment Written 10-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Hi Bridget Thank you so much for the exceptional rating and review and please cpme alpng with me amytime My job is a good one busy but rewarding Cheers Christine
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Well it appears that you experience 2 rainbows in one day one from walking in the rain that was outside as you walked into your class with your umbrella. And then the final rainbow after a day of teaching students the things that you had inside of you to share that really seem to blow from what you taught them and they got it
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Well it appears that you experience 2 rainbows in one day one from walking in the rain that was outside as you walked into your class with your umbrella. And then the final rainbow after a day of teaching students the things that you had inside of you to share that really seem to blow from what you taught them and they got it
Comment Written 10-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Hi MaryThank you and yes it was a great day a rainbow at the start and one at the end after a great day with the students Cheers Christine
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Great piece
Comment from Mark Valentine
First, what a noble and admirable occupation you have. It makes the world a better place. Your poem is a great tribute to it. I love how the last line gives new meaning to the first. The iambic tetrameter is well done as are the rhymes. Mostly though, I love (and could learn from) the attitude of your poem - walking to work knowing you're about to do something meaningful and valuable. Thanks for this one.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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First, what a noble and admirable occupation you have. It makes the world a better place. Your poem is a great tribute to it. I love how the last line gives new meaning to the first. The iambic tetrameter is well done as are the rhymes. Mostly though, I love (and could learn from) the attitude of your poem - walking to work knowing you're about to do something meaningful and valuable. Thanks for this one.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Hi Mark Thank you for your review and yes itcisxa great job I have been nursing now for 48 years and teaching for 26 so jave seen a lot and done a lot and it was a nice day to start woth a rainbow and to look at my stidents at the end pf the day and see their bright faces after a hard days work Very rewarding Cheers Christine
Comment from apky
It is not often tha t someone so totally enjoys their professional as well as feel that it is "A rewarding job and this is just a reflection of one of my days and I did start with a rainbow and drizzle rain."
Your positive outlook made me read the poem twice just to savour it.
Very well done.
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It is not often tha t someone so totally enjoys their professional as well as feel that it is "A rewarding job and this is just a reflection of one of my days and I did start with a rainbow and drizzle rain."
Your positive outlook made me read the poem twice just to savour it.
Very well done.
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Comment Written 10-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Hi apky Thank you very much I am so pleased you liked this one and yes I do enjoy my profession and love teaching the students and get such a buzz when the get it and work well. I have been nursing for 48 years and teaching for 26 and everyday is a new one. Many Cheers for your lovely words Smiling Christine
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, great entry for the challenge. I thought the picture suits the poem when you open this window, nice and bold, and the poem is lovely with beautiful imagery. The author notes are good, too, nice of you to share your personal info like that, and it made the poem more real because you know it's based in truth, I saw nothing to fix and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
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Hello, great entry for the challenge. I thought the picture suits the poem when you open this window, nice and bold, and the poem is lovely with beautiful imagery. The author notes are good, too, nice of you to share your personal info like that, and it made the poem more real because you know it's based in truth, I saw nothing to fix and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.
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Comment Written 10-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Hi Ana, Thank you very much and I enjoy sharing with my poetry and yes it is all true I have lovely students and they are learning I am an 'old school' nurse been around now for 48 years and still enjoying my career. it is often easier to write from experience too Cheers Christine