Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

The title of this poem caught my attention. The poet did a great job writing this poem that has lots of imagery and it is easy to read and to understand which makes it a pleasure to read.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018

Thanks very much for the kind comments, I really appreciate them. Craig

Comment from beizanten

Excellent

A pretty interesting and well written first stanza. Imteresting second stanza. a pretty good third stanza. Question please is this base on a game? What is a sockdolager. Overall a pretty good poetry

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 Comment Written 07-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018

No games. Sockdolager is explained in the notes under the poem. Many thanks for the review - Craig

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

Wow !
That's a mighty impressive word indeed.
The wisdom in your author notes complements the poem well.
To protect our planet a huge shift in mindset wil be needed
On a universal level.
Definitely a sockdolager.
Blessings
Shirley


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 Comment Written 07-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018

Thanks very much, Shirley, for the kind comments. Most appreciated! Craig