A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Love this well written sonnet and your new word included in it. Great rhymes and flow and I so enjoyed your deep meaning here, sometimes we imprison ourselves, so true and this well deserves a six, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Love this well written sonnet and your new word included in it. Great rhymes and flow and I so enjoyed your deep meaning here, sometimes we imprison ourselves, so true and this well deserves a six, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much, Dolly! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, and your kind words and generous assessment mean I can go to bed with a smile on my face :) Most grateful, Craig
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Have a good sleep! Well deserved Craig, a magical sonnet god bless, love Dolly x
Comment from Joy Graham
Good job on the sonnet :) Good iambic pentameter, fine rhymes, good turn, good closing couplet. A fine theme that works to highlight your word for the day. I have heard of absconsion before. "He absconded with the money."
Joy xx
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Good job on the sonnet :) Good iambic pentameter, fine rhymes, good turn, good closing couplet. A fine theme that works to highlight your word for the day. I have heard of absconsion before. "He absconded with the money."
Joy xx
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Hi Joy - yep, same thing, the verb form you gave being much more in use. Thanks for the lovely comments - Craig
Comment from Sugarray77
A very clever and realistic poem using one of your new words, "absconsion". I highly enjoy going through your book with you. Good poetry is built on using many words and I'm learning from you! Thanks and well done!
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A very clever and realistic poem using one of your new words, "absconsion". I highly enjoy going through your book with you. Good poetry is built on using many words and I'm learning from you! Thanks and well done!
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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I'm glad to have you along for the ride :) If I can remember a fraction of these words, the exercise will have proved worthwhile. Thanks so much for the kind words. Craig