Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

LOL! Tom, you certainly came up with the goods! This fits the photo perfectly, and I love the rhyme scheme that you've chosen as it really does match the statue. You've rhymed it as well, that took some doing. Well done, my friend, I really enjoyed reading it. :) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Thank you Sandra. I was a lark! You got me smiling again!

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written combination poem of 5-7-5 and Etheree. The picture and statue of the woman ready to fly is an excellent complement to this poem combination

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Thank you Sandra.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

These writes inspired by statues have been a joy and your day out has been rewarding. Our ability to fly, letting our spirit free is quite amazing and your poem us uplifting, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Thank you Dolly. Yes, literally uplifting. Lol.

Comment from Katie Solis

Excellent

Great job. I love the form your poem took combining the haiku and the etheree, especially with both of them being centered. It was so beautiful, and full of imagery; and then the last line regarding Superman left me with a smile on my face.

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 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Thank you Katie. I made my goal if I made you smile. Have a great day!