Little Poems
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Comment from Pantygynt
I t is rare to see anything written with full length dactylic lines like this, a cussedly awkward metre to write in if you ask me, so very well done to have achieved this. One can almost feel the horse's indecision on the brink of the leap. I is a clever piece.
"I cajoled, and I coxed." This should be coaxed.
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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I t is rare to see anything written with full length dactylic lines like this, a cussedly awkward metre to write in if you ask me, so very well done to have achieved this. One can almost feel the horse's indecision on the brink of the leap. I is a clever piece.
"I cajoled, and I coxed." This should be coaxed.
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Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Thank you Pantygynt. AH, you are correct. I'll fix that. Thanks for the review too.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Your wonderful imagination is working nicely.
Your verse has a clear story matching the picture perfectly.
Well done, and thank you for sharing this fun verse with us.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Your wonderful imagination is working nicely.
Your verse has a clear story matching the picture perfectly.
Well done, and thank you for sharing this fun verse with us.
Sharon
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Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Thank you Sharon. I love the review, and appreciate the compliment. Have a great day!
