Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

I have heard of fuzzy logic before, and am sure that I am often guilty of it! However, propinque is a new word for me. I only knew of the abstract noun, 'propinquity', but don't think I have ever used it in preference to 'proximity'.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018

Thanks for reviewing, Tony. I'd never heard it in any form before, so you were one up on me. Cheers, Craig

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Dr Ricky 1024.

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 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018

Thanks very much for reviewing, and for the comments, which are appreciated. Craig

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks an apology and an ode to fuzzy logic, fine and appropriate use of the word in literal expression; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 04-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018

Thanks for reviewing, much appreciated. Craig