Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I like this saying and if only we could realise it is a storm in a teacup and not let it escalate into a war, so many will take the excuse to the extreme, a clever write here of the truth of war, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018

Thanks very much, Dolly. The lovely comments are much appreciated - Craig

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Well, I don't know how you got so much history, plot, action and social commentary into one short poem, but you did it! Well done and I especially liked the part about poor civilians who lost their lives because of a battle over semantics. :)

Great job with this. I do believe you've found your voice.

Gloria

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018

Thanks for the lovely review, Gloria. Author notes help lol

Cheers - Craig