This Time - That Time 2
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Comment from alexisleech
Another great chapter, Sandra. You have managed to 'show,' not tell, especially regarding the build up to the exposure of who Frances' father is - although we're still left to find out exactly who he is.!
I can't wait for part Two - you teasing woman.
Hugs from France,
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Another great chapter, Sandra. You have managed to 'show,' not tell, especially regarding the build up to the exposure of who Frances' father is - although we're still left to find out exactly who he is.!
I can't wait for part Two - you teasing woman.
Hugs from France,
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Aww, thank you, Alexis, for all those bright, shiny stars! I'm on tenterhooks too, it's so frustrating now knowing who the father is. LOL!!! Biggest hugs, my dear friend. Sandra xxxxxxx
Comment from Aussie
From the future and the past - wot a blast! Here I am reading your writing and thinking, you wouldn't have written this type of story a couple of years ago, now, it is fantastic. They both traveled through doors and Gwendolyn wasn't sure if Veronica was a ghost. Have you found a title for this book? Or are you sticking with what you have?
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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From the future and the past - wot a blast! Here I am reading your writing and thinking, you wouldn't have written this type of story a couple of years ago, now, it is fantastic. They both traveled through doors and Gwendolyn wasn't sure if Veronica was a ghost. Have you found a title for this book? Or are you sticking with what you have?
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2017
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Thank you so very much, Kay, for the lovely 6 stars! I've decided to call all three books This Time - That Time, 1-2-3 with a second title underneath. The first book, which will be on Kindle probably next week, will just have the main title. The paperback, I believe, will be out a few days later. It's so exciting. Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxxxx
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You paranormal person you! Very excited for you. Will you sell it on The Book Depository?
I love having a famous author as my friend. Are you having a book opening somewhere? Much love and care, Kay XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Comment from royowen
A really great conversation between Lady Gwendoline and Veronica, trying to nut through how they can save Francis from frightened and desparste clutches of Sir John, but the are unsure of which way to tackle it. Perhaps Joe is the key to all this. Great scribing Friend Sandra, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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A really great conversation between Lady Gwendoline and Veronica, trying to nut through how they can save Francis from frightened and desparste clutches of Sir John, but the are unsure of which way to tackle it. Perhaps Joe is the key to all this. Great scribing Friend Sandra, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Thank you, my dear Roy. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying this and you're right, Joe has to come into it soon. But will he be the answer?? :) Big hugs, my dear friend. Sandra xxxx
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Well done Sandra
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A well written story.
The characters are well presented and the story is interesting.
Coming in part way through and reading only a portion, I can still understand what is happening.
Well done.
Sharon
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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A well written story.
The characters are well presented and the story is interesting.
Coming in part way through and reading only a portion, I can still understand what is happening.
Well done.
Sharon
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Aw, thank you, Sharon, that is so nice of you. There is lots to be found out, this is really just the start of whats to come. It's nice that you could get the feel of it without having read the rest. Thank you! xxx
Comment from wordsfromsue
I find myself sitting here with my coffee, reading and feeling so apprehensive about what Sir John might do to Francis.... and then I realize... "Wait a minute, this is just fiction!"
Which is to relay how captivating your story is!!
You BETTER give Francis a happy ending.... concerned readers everywhere care!
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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I find myself sitting here with my coffee, reading and feeling so apprehensive about what Sir John might do to Francis.... and then I realize... "Wait a minute, this is just fiction!"
Which is to relay how captivating your story is!!
You BETTER give Francis a happy ending.... concerned readers everywhere care!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Aw, Sue, that is such a lovely review! Thank you so very much! You have no idea what your words meant to me. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from JDRBAR
The story simply continues to get better and better. If there were any errors, I was oblivious to them. I hope you are feeling better. I know how hard it can be to post when you don't feel well.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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The story simply continues to get better and better. If there were any errors, I was oblivious to them. I hope you are feeling better. I know how hard it can be to post when you don't feel well.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much, my friend, for another lovely review. Yes, I'm feeling lots better now. Thank you for asking. Big hugs. my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Such a great read, Sandra - the suspense is mounting - No wonder Francis' mum is worried - when she can do nothing to help.
Hope you are feeling better. When I had the flu jab early in Oct., I had a touch of the flu - hit my head, limbs and my throat closed up AND WE HAD TO MOVE - so you can imagine how exhausting it was - took me a while to recover.
Hugs,
Margaret
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Such a great read, Sandra - the suspense is mounting - No wonder Francis' mum is worried - when she can do nothing to help.
Hope you are feeling better. When I had the flu jab early in Oct., I had a touch of the flu - hit my head, limbs and my throat closed up AND WE HAD TO MOVE - so you can imagine how exhausting it was - took me a while to recover.
Hugs,
Margaret
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Thank you so very much for the 6 stars, Margaret! And the lovely review.
That is exactly how I felt. I've had my inhaler going so often - I was beginning to worry. I don't know how you coped with the move on top of that, it must have knocked you for six. I hope you are fully recovered now and happily settled in your new home. That alone is stressful when you're fit and well!
Thank you again, my friend. Hugs back. :) Sandra xx
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Sandra
= Sorry to hear you've not been feeling well, but glad you're better.
= We got our flu shots, so hopefully, we're good to go.
= Of course, another super chapter.
= You've left a good end hook as well. Nice job, my friend.
= Take care.
= Congrats on 2nd place for 'BOM'.
= Cheers, J
= Have a good day/evening!
(*>*) Remember--A Smile Is A Frown Upside Town (*<*)
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Hi, Sandra
= Sorry to hear you've not been feeling well, but glad you're better.
= We got our flu shots, so hopefully, we're good to go.
= Of course, another super chapter.
= You've left a good end hook as well. Nice job, my friend.
= Take care.
= Congrats on 2nd place for 'BOM'.
= Cheers, J
= Have a good day/evening!
(*>*) Remember--A Smile Is A Frown Upside Town (*<*)
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Thank you, Jackie. I do feel better now. I hope you jab keeps you safe from the flu, it can really bring you down and I know that's the last thing you want after the year you've had. Thank you for the lovely review, my friend, and the congrats. Big hugs! Sandra xxx
Comment from Ben Colder
My failure to have started with your story hinders the understanding to an unfruitful knowledge of things. However, I find no fault and compliment you on its depth with dialog with the spirit of the future. I voted for you on the book of the month I hope you won. Best to you my dear friend.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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My failure to have started with your story hinders the understanding to an unfruitful knowledge of things. However, I find no fault and compliment you on its depth with dialog with the spirit of the future. I voted for you on the book of the month I hope you won. Best to you my dear friend.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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Aww, thank you so much, dear Ben. That is so nice of you. And thank you for the vote, I came in 2nd, which was brilliant when I think of the amazing writers we have on this site. The six stars are so lovely, thank you for awarding me them, my wonderful friend. Bless your heart. Big hugs and much love, Sandy. xxxxx
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Cousin.
I'm bloody getting further and further behind... sheesh! Sorry.
"He never forgave me for falling in love with Francis's father and then being with child.'" (Ah, the plot thickens!)
" Can you tell me who his father's(-'s... I think) is,"
" Gwendolyne(-e) didn't look convinced. 'Can you take him away from here?'"
"He(,) in turn(,) mentioned it to the game keeper(gamekeeper), who then told"
" 'Yes, she married your brother's grandson in the future--'" (Yep, that could be a tad complicated to understand lol.)
Another powerful chapter and suspenseful finish. Very well written once again, Cuz.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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G'day Cousin.
I'm bloody getting further and further behind... sheesh! Sorry.
"He never forgave me for falling in love with Francis's father and then being with child.'" (Ah, the plot thickens!)
" Can you tell me who his father's(-'s... I think) is,"
" Gwendolyne(-e) didn't look convinced. 'Can you take him away from here?'"
"He(,) in turn(,) mentioned it to the game keeper(gamekeeper), who then told"
" 'Yes, she married your brother's grandson in the future--'" (Yep, that could be a tad complicated to understand lol.)
Another powerful chapter and suspenseful finish. Very well written once again, Cuz.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2017
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You say that every time!! LOL! And you haven't missed any. Thank you so much, my dearest Cousin for this lovely, helpful review. I've had a foggy head this past week after having the flu jab. I thought it was supposed to stop the flu, not give it boxing gloves! I've made all the corrections now, it was my doctor's fault! LOL. Thank you for the lovely six stars, I'd give you the biggest hug if you were here. When you are rich and famous you'll have to come and meet the family, and we can meet yours. How is it going? Lots of love, dear Cousin! Sandra xxxx
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Always welcome cousin.
Tell your Dr that I'll deal with him when I get there.
I'm almost done on the editing and should have it ready in the next couple of days. Good luck.
We'll certainly pop in for a while once it's a deal.
Delia says Kumusta.
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LOL, my doctor would be out of there is an shot! Good luck my friend. And one other thing, don't give up at the first rejections, those publishers will be kicking themselves one day. Just like the ones that turned JK Rowling's down! I bet some heads got chopped off for that blunder!! xxx