Winter Death
Winter always comes too early.17 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Fabulous piece of poetry. I really enjoyed this and found it to be superbly creative and unique.
Favorite lines:
It's in the air now chilly, raw,
the clinging fog that's your bad breath.
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You're shrouded in your hooded cloak
outside my window this gray day,
a silent shadow in the fog.
I dread your coming, fear you'll stay.
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Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Fabulous piece of poetry. I really enjoyed this and found it to be superbly creative and unique.
Favorite lines:
It's in the air now chilly, raw,
the clinging fog that's your bad breath.
***
You're shrouded in your hooded cloak
outside my window this gray day,
a silent shadow in the fog.
I dread your coming, fear you'll stay.
***
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for sharing my poem, Robyn, and your wonderful praise. I am delighted you found it both "creative and unique." And I truly appreciate all those stars.
Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed your personification of winter poem, I find it kind of creepy but I can definitely imagine the scene with death sweeping in over autumn trees and fields. Thanks for sharing and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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I enjoyed your personification of winter poem, I find it kind of creepy but I can definitely imagine the scene with death sweeping in over autumn trees and fields. Thanks for sharing and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thank you, oliver818, for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Mimi Linny
Nicely done piece on the the dark side of winter! The rhyme and rhythm are well done and makes the story flow easily. Very haunting vision presented with the words you've chosen. Brrrr.... Great job!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Nicely done piece on the the dark side of winter! The rhyme and rhythm are well done and makes the story flow easily. Very haunting vision presented with the words you've chosen. Brrrr.... Great job!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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I am delighted you enjoyed my poem about the dark side of winter, Mimi. Thank you for your very kind praise.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A good Four Seasons poem. Well written and rhymed.
I tells a good story.
And I love the picture it paints.
Good luck with you competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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A good Four Seasons poem. Well written and rhymed.
I tells a good story.
And I love the picture it paints.
Good luck with you competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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I am delighted you enjoyed my personification poem, Sharon. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
The leaves bleed out, then flutter down - I love these line, following on from the autumnal changing colour to the final plunge to the ground... very nice.
I really liked this piece. the last line is chilling.
GMG
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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Hi there,
The leaves bleed out, then flutter down - I love these line, following on from the autumnal changing colour to the final plunge to the ground... very nice.
I really liked this piece. the last line is chilling.
GMG
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thank you for sharing my piece, GMG. I am delighted you enjoyed those lines and appreciate your kind praise.
Comment from kahpot
Yes an excellent write and poem of a Winter very few welcome, you have described its devastation to all natures beauty wonderfully very well done****kahpot
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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Yes an excellent write and poem of a Winter very few welcome, you have described its devastation to all natures beauty wonderfully very well done****kahpot
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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True, I do not welcome winter, but I truly appreciate your taking the time to share and praise my poem.
Comment from Dean Kuch
I'm glad I had one six left to award this masterfully written piece on the personification of Winter.
And while I do not detest Winter in the least (I adore and welcome Winter in fact), I can appreciate the fact that everyone is entitled to his or her opinions.
Well done.
You'll have my vote!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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I'm glad I had one six left to award this masterfully written piece on the personification of Winter.
And while I do not detest Winter in the least (I adore and welcome Winter in fact), I can appreciate the fact that everyone is entitled to his or her opinions.
Well done.
You'll have my vote!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2017
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Thank you so much for your fabulous praise of my poem, Dean, and your generous gift of stars.
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I hope my vote helps as well.
Good luck!
~Dean :)
