The Crew Cut, Daddy O
6 Word Poem19 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written humorous six-word poem. It look like Mom's homemade haircut go terribly wrong and then become a fashion statement. We must be careful it may become a fashion statement again. Lol.
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A very well-written humorous six-word poem. It look like Mom's homemade haircut go terribly wrong and then become a fashion statement. We must be careful it may become a fashion statement again. Lol.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Michael. Well I can definitely see where you were taking this one. It feels more like a statement than a poem though, at least for me. Still you have a certain somethin somethin that keeps a reader reading. That can't be all bad! Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
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Hi Michael. Well I can definitely see where you were taking this one. It feels more like a statement than a poem though, at least for me. Still you have a certain somethin somethin that keeps a reader reading. That can't be all bad! Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
Comment from Gloria ....
I got a charge out of the haircut there. Is that do where the box tops got their moniker from?
I can see now why evolution was disproved, you forgot the missing link. What was the missing link again?
You got six words and slipped in a few more too. ;-) but you have to do that with the black background.
Anyway I have rambled on here. Best of luck in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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I got a charge out of the haircut there. Is that do where the box tops got their moniker from?
I can see now why evolution was disproved, you forgot the missing link. What was the missing link again?
You got six words and slipped in a few more too. ;-) but you have to do that with the black background.
Anyway I have rambled on here. Best of luck in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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Yeah, a little desperation I suppose with the extra words. I think the missing link may be nearby. I thought of volunteering, but I wouldn't want to give up my position here at Fanstory. Sigh ... if I only had seven words. mike
Comment from nordicgirl
God, I hate that haircut, he he he. I know, you like it even less. Clever, so then our existence shows that evolution is wrong because we are LESS than what came before us, right? Har harrrrr. You're probably right after the last election. NG
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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God, I hate that haircut, he he he. I know, you like it even less. Clever, so then our existence shows that evolution is wrong because we are LESS than what came before us, right? Har harrrrr. You're probably right after the last election. NG
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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I was thinking of the fifties with the haircut, but I fear it won't be taken that way. Oh well, you're too generous. Thanks, michael
Comment from DR DIP
That's a pretty sharp haircut I must say typical boot camp army material.
ASMHE..disproved? Alpha beta foxtrot alpha beta foxtrot. Thanks for posting sargeant cahill!
dip
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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That's a pretty sharp haircut I must say typical boot camp army material.
ASMHE..disproved? Alpha beta foxtrot alpha beta foxtrot. Thanks for posting sargeant cahill!
dip
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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High and tight ... meant something different to us long hairs. LOL mike
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yeah it was more about a girl's pussy then a haircut lol
Comment from Liberty Justice
Very interesting photo. Looks like a military man, is he? Your poem is short and sweet and certainly gets to the point. "Evolution--disapproved" is certainly a mysterious subject. Good luck in your contests. lol liberty justice
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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Very interesting photo. Looks like a military man, is he? Your poem is short and sweet and certainly gets to the point. "Evolution--disapproved" is certainly a mysterious subject. Good luck in your contests. lol liberty justice
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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Supposed to be a fifties person, but I guess it IS a military cut. :)) mike
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a cute six word poem. Well done.
And that picture... Please tell me that crew cuts have not come back into style.
Good luck in the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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This is a cute six word poem. Well done.
And that picture... Please tell me that crew cuts have not come back into style.
Good luck in the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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HA! I don't think so, at least not in my house. mike
Comment from Brigitte Elko
Awesome work, as always. The picture was an excellent choice to accompany this work. You are an amazing story teller with six words or hundreds. This piece is quite unique and interesting. The Theory of Evolution is put to the test by you,the poet, one of the best. Wish I had a six star left.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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Awesome work, as always. The picture was an excellent choice to accompany this work. You are an amazing story teller with six words or hundreds. This piece is quite unique and interesting. The Theory of Evolution is put to the test by you,the poet, one of the best. Wish I had a six star left.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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You are way to kind, but I'll take it with a smile. Thanks a million. :)) mike
Comment from BOO ghost
He looks like Howie Long. I remember my uncle Frank having a flat top back in the sixties. Looks like an ostrich could lay a golden egg on it. Johnny B Good comes to mind. Best looking six word poem I seen yet. Who is this dude? good luck in the contest! You woke up the ghost, Cahill. BOO-tastic!
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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He looks like Howie Long. I remember my uncle Frank having a flat top back in the sixties. Looks like an ostrich could lay a golden egg on it. Johnny B Good comes to mind. Best looking six word poem I seen yet. Who is this dude? good luck in the contest! You woke up the ghost, Cahill. BOO-tastic!
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2017
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I don't know who it is. Yep, Howie Long sported that look, but he could pull it off. LOL'
Glad to see you awake ... well, if I could SEE you. HAHAHA! mike
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You can't see a ghost, Mikey. you woke BOO up from a slumber, now I got to write. Lol! BOO!
