Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Exceptional

I found no problems with the writing and this is absolutely the best I have read for this contest. Well constructed and well told with a great climax very unexpected.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017

Thanks so much for the wonderful comments, Barb, and also for the kind and generous rating. Both are really appreciated - Craig.

Comment from dmt1967

Exceptional

'I simply can't wait - I've been anticipating (for) this for months, and now the night has finally arrived! I'm trembling like a little schoolgirl. (delete)

Very well written and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017

Thank you so much for the wonderful rating, the kind comments, and especially for catching the glitch - which I've now corrected. Much appreciated, Craig.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Horror story. The feeling that your spouse is not faithful is most of the time right. Jealousy can turn into murderous actions without any warning.

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 Comment Written 14-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017

Thank you Sandra, for the kind words of support. Occasionally, I like to visit the dark side, but I don't actually find it all that easy. It's a challenge lol