The Change Of Seasons
winter is coming soon...35 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Congratulations on your well-deserved win. I thought it was funny and clever
it certainly put a smile on my face. I like the picture too, it goes well with it.
Well done, Bill, it was a pleasure to read and view. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Congratulations on your well-deserved win. I thought it was funny and clever
it certainly put a smile on my face. I like the picture too, it goes well with it.
Well done, Bill, it was a pleasure to read and view. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 13-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Sandra for your wonderful review, I appreciate it. I'm really glad that you liked it. I haven't spoken to you for awhile, I haven't been around much. How are you doing my friend? Bill
Comment from Lena Borghi
A strip show! An excellent metaphor for the phenomenon of the leaf drop in the fall. Clever and well written. Thanks for sharing this and congratulations on your win!
Best,
Lena
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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A strip show! An excellent metaphor for the phenomenon of the leaf drop in the fall. Clever and well written. Thanks for sharing this and congratulations on your win!
Best,
Lena
Comment Written 13-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Lena, for your great review, I appreciate it. Have a nice Sunday...Bill
Comment from Hitcher
This clever little 5-7-5 contest poem made me smile friend, a Great use of the form with entertaining visuals that dance and delight the reader, I can see why you won the contest with it. Congratulations Cedar
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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This clever little 5-7-5 contest poem made me smile friend, a Great use of the form with entertaining visuals that dance and delight the reader, I can see why you won the contest with it. Congratulations Cedar
Comment Written 13-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Thank you, for your excellent review, I really appreciate your kind words. Have a great Sunday, my friend...Bill
Comment from pome lover
very clever! I can see why you won. congratulations!
never thought of falling autumn leaves that way.
you could expand on that theme and make it funny! or sensuous.
However, this is very good - a winner. Made me smile.
well done.
pome lover
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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very clever! I can see why you won. congratulations!
never thought of falling autumn leaves that way.
you could expand on that theme and make it funny! or sensuous.
However, this is very good - a winner. Made me smile.
well done.
pome lover
Comment Written 12-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Thank you, for your excellent review, I appreciate it. I'm glad it made you smile. Enjoy the weekend my friend...Bill
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. That's cute and G rated. That's one way to look at the trees as they loose all their leaves. I always think of them as large heads losing all their hair once a year. But the "limbs" work well from the perspective of this poem.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Lol. That's cute and G rated. That's one way to look at the trees as they loose all their leaves. I always think of them as large heads losing all their hair once a year. But the "limbs" work well from the perspective of this poem.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Thank you, for your excellent review. I appreciate it. Have a great weekend my friend...Bill
Comment from Gert sherwood
Ah Bill
I see that you received top prize for your clever striping autumn leave leaving nothing but bear branches
( very original thought)
Smiles
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Ah Bill
I see that you received top prize for your clever striping autumn leave leaving nothing but bear branches
( very original thought)
Smiles
Gert
Comment Written 12-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Thank you, Gert, for your wonderful review, I really appreciate it. Take care of yourself my friend and have a great weekend...Bill
Comment from nbonner
I liked this. Short and sweet and to the point. It reminds of my childhood when the leaves would fall and as kids we would pile them all together then jump right in there. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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I liked this. Short and sweet and to the point. It reminds of my childhood when the leaves would fall and as kids we would pile them all together then jump right in there. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 12-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate it. And, welcome to the site. Have a great weekend...Bill
Comment from Pantygynt
Autumn already! And we've had hardly any summer her in the UK. No I think it will be a month or two yet before the trees put on their exotic plumage just to strip it off, and when it is all gone the result is not as interesting as the human parallel. Winter would be quite interesting wqre it so.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Autumn already! And we've had hardly any summer her in the UK. No I think it will be a month or two yet before the trees put on their exotic plumage just to strip it off, and when it is all gone the result is not as interesting as the human parallel. Winter would be quite interesting wqre it so.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Thank you, for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Yes, it will be at least 2 or 3 months before the leaves start to fall here also. Have a great weekend my friend...Bill
Comment from RebelRose
Nice play on words. Never thought of falling leaves in quite that way. I can easily see how this won first place. Very original. Well done.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Nice play on words. Never thought of falling leaves in quite that way. I can easily see how this won first place. Very original. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Thank you, RebelRose for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great weekend my friend...Bill
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
an au/tumn strip show 5
as the trees re/move their leaves 7
ex/po/sing bare limbs 5.................good syllable count, well connected lines, nice imagery. No wonder you won. Good job!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Hello, my friend,
an au/tumn strip show 5
as the trees re/move their leaves 7
ex/po/sing bare limbs 5.................good syllable count, well connected lines, nice imagery. No wonder you won. Good job!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
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Thank you, Gypsy, for your excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend...Bill
