Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "haiku (day of the dead)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
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Comment from l.raven
HI Gypsy, I pray for and to people who have passed...my friends and family...so good to see you sweet girl...love your poem Queen of Haiku...and the perfect picture...very well written...Love you Linda xxoo
still working on my house...hoping it is almost over...ccoo love
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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HI Gypsy, I pray for and to people who have passed...my friends and family...so good to see you sweet girl...love your poem Queen of Haiku...and the perfect picture...very well written...Love you Linda xxoo
still working on my house...hoping it is almost over...ccoo love
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie. I love you too.
Gypsy hugs
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your sooooo welcome you...always...love xxoo
Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for sharing another of your fine poems. I'm probably going to have to break down and take a shot at writing a Haiku sometime in the near future when I get the cast and splint off my hands. Who knows, I might even take a class. But it will be a while yet. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thanks for sharing another of your fine poems. I'm probably going to have to break down and take a shot at writing a Haiku sometime in the near future when I get the cast and splint off my hands. Who knows, I might even take a class. But it will be a while yet. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
It's a funny time, I didn't know these dates were vital, but whatever Gypsy, you've produced an excellent haiku, there's a tradition of praying for the dead, according to scripture it's too late. Well dine, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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It's a funny time, I didn't know these dates were vital, but whatever Gypsy, you've produced an excellent haiku, there's a tradition of praying for the dead, according to scripture it's too late. Well dine, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend. It's just a poem, for my personal belief, I pray for the family and friends alive.
Gypsy
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Most welcome Gypsy
Comment from MizKat
Hi Gypsy Blue Rose,
Your poem was very interesting to read. I love the picture that you used with it too. You are great at writing things and I love to read them.
Kat
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Hi Gypsy Blue Rose,
Your poem was very interesting to read. I love the picture that you used with it too. You are great at writing things and I love to read them.
Kat
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend.
Gypsy
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You're very welcome Gypsy. Kat
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Gypsy, Is this a Haiku because it is under the 17 syllable count? The mention of "Day of the Dead", does that create the nature segment instead of human nature? Loved the sentiment, however still a lil bit confused on the difference of Senyr human relations as opposed to the nature aspect of the Haiku. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Hello Gypsy, Is this a Haiku because it is under the 17 syllable count? The mention of "Day of the Dead", does that create the nature segment instead of human nature? Loved the sentiment, however still a lil bit confused on the difference of Senyr human relations as opposed to the nature aspect of the Haiku. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend.
Gypsy
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend this is well written and reads very well you have the ability and talent to turn so many subjects into hake's this is very well presented too I enjoyed regards Jill
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Hello my friend this is well written and reads very well you have the ability and talent to turn so many subjects into hake's this is very well presented too I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend.
Gypsy
Comment from Mark Schardine
We recall our deceased loved ones, and pray for the repose of their souls. It is a good deed, and even though we never feel we honored their memory like we should, we perform this act of love.
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We recall our deceased loved ones, and pray for the repose of their souls. It is a good deed, and even though we never feel we honored their memory like we should, we perform this act of love.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend.
Gypsy
Comment from Gert sherwood
Gypsy your [day of the dead's] is so poetic in a haiku.
I believe it's a special day to pray, celebrate and remember the one or ones that have passed away, in Mexico.
Question
what syllable count is required for the prayer
Gert
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Gypsy your [day of the dead's] is so poetic in a haiku.
I believe it's a special day to pray, celebrate and remember the one or ones that have passed away, in Mexico.
Question
what syllable count is required for the prayer
Gert
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend. The syllable count for haiku is always 17 syllables or LESS
Gypsy
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You are welcome
TY for answering my question
Gert
Comment from Rasmine
Hello, :)
Awesome haiku, Gypsy, :) 'In the name of love', is a perfect five syllables.
I don't see any errors or room for improvement (of course, I would feel uncomfortable giving creative criticism to a teacher of haikus :P
TC
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Hello, :)
Awesome haiku, Gypsy, :) 'In the name of love', is a perfect five syllables.
I don't see any errors or room for improvement (of course, I would feel uncomfortable giving creative criticism to a teacher of haikus :P
TC
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Please don't feel uncomfortable giving me your honest creative criticism, as long as it is kind, I really don't mind. I am not perfect and I make mistakes like everyone else.
Thank you very much.
Gypsy
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TY, Gypsy, and TY, for your support with 'Flower Power'. Just don't think it's ever going to get published. It's probably too silly an idea :P
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Day of the Dead, uses its sixteen syllables to create a place where those who have passed can be hurried on their immortal way. Nice poem.
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This haiku, Day of the Dead, uses its sixteen syllables to create a place where those who have passed can be hurried on their immortal way. Nice poem.
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much.
Gypsy
