Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "haiku (art of seduction)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
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Comment from BOO ghost
Don't know if that is a good idea, to run to the shore after bikini top comes off. Lot of perverts on the beach. Pedro, hum, I bet that did get his attention, naughty girl. Was not a nude beach? Sounds like mid-summer madness. Where did this happen?
BOO-rageous!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Don't know if that is a good idea, to run to the shore after bikini top comes off. Lot of perverts on the beach. Pedro, hum, I bet that did get his attention, naughty girl. Was not a nude beach? Sounds like mid-summer madness. Where did this happen?
BOO-rageous!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my haiku, you are very kind.
Gypsy hugs
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Part of the game. I bet you are busy with teaching classes in that team speak group.. wish i could fix my audible, I get video, no audible. may be my headsets are bad or plugin. Later, gypsy.
Comment from DR DIP
Lucky Pedro! Summer love gee I remember those days but I certainly had nogirl come up to me asking me to tie up their bikini top Its a good line gypsy I must admit. Thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Lucky Pedro! Summer love gee I remember those days but I certainly had nogirl come up to me asking me to tie up their bikini top Its a good line gypsy I must admit. Thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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thank you
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Oh Gypsy you naughty girl. Wish I'd of thought of something like that! smiling. Great haiku too. Oh don't you just love the thought of summertime, heat and all that passion? Loved it. xoox Kiwi
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Oh Gypsy you naughty girl. Wish I'd of thought of something like that! smiling. Great haiku too. Oh don't you just love the thought of summertime, heat and all that passion? Loved it. xoox Kiwi
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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LOL............. Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my haiku, you are very kind.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from krys123
Cheers, Gypsy;
-here we have a haiku that shows the keen awareness of a woman's powerful approach to romanticism. As in this photo she is I'm sure with a towel over her head , presumably, naked body while standing on shore or beach of some ocean or mass of water. Only one can conclude from the satori that she purposely did this to show her cunning.
-A very clever haiku and one that shows an incredibly amount of creativity and inventiveness.
-Thanks for sharing and take care and have a good one.
Alex
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Cheers, Gypsy;
-here we have a haiku that shows the keen awareness of a woman's powerful approach to romanticism. As in this photo she is I'm sure with a towel over her head , presumably, naked body while standing on shore or beach of some ocean or mass of water. Only one can conclude from the satori that she purposely did this to show her cunning.
-A very clever haiku and one that shows an incredibly amount of creativity and inventiveness.
-Thanks for sharing and take care and have a good one.
Alex
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my haiku, you are very kind.
Gypsy
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You are very welcome my friend.
Alex
Comment from Ric Myworld
I must shamefully admit that, this picture and poem alone are seductive enough for my tongue to get stuck over my eye tooth so that I can't even see what I'm saying, or doing. Of course, a beach bum at heart, just the waves, salt air, and the sand between my toes is all it takes to pump up my hormones. Well, at least this old guy can still talk a good game. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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I must shamefully admit that, this picture and poem alone are seductive enough for my tongue to get stuck over my eye tooth so that I can't even see what I'm saying, or doing. Of course, a beach bum at heart, just the waves, salt air, and the sand between my toes is all it takes to pump up my hormones. Well, at least this old guy can still talk a good game. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my haiku, you are very kind.
Gypsy
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Gypsy
Ah your haiku really go my full attention,
now weren't you the clever one to get a fellow's attention with your fun way of pretending.
Gert
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Hello Gypsy
Ah your haiku really go my full attention,
now weren't you the clever one to get a fellow's attention with your fun way of pretending.
Gert
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my haiku, you are very kind.
Gypsy
Comment from Joan E.
First, thank you for including additional context for this 5-7-5 in your notes. Ah, to be fifteen again! Your picture selection parallels the theme perfectly. Second, congratulations on publishing the collection. Big cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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First, thank you for including additional context for this 5-7-5 in your notes. Ah, to be fifteen again! Your picture selection parallels the theme perfectly. Second, congratulations on publishing the collection. Big cheers- Joan
Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my haiku, you are very kind.
Gypsy
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Congratulations on the good news.
this haiku is very well done on the summer season of seduction. Who has not tried this? Worked for me.lol
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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Congratulations on the good news.
this haiku is very well done on the summer season of seduction. Who has not tried this? Worked for me.lol
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much :)
gypsy
Comment from MizKat
The picture of the lady is nice. You did a good job in writing about it.
I always look forward to reading what you write as you're so good at
doing it. Kat
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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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The picture of the lady is nice. You did a good job in writing about it.
I always look forward to reading what you write as you're so good at
doing it. Kat
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much :)
gypsy
