Little Poems
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Comment from joeruptak
Very clever and entertaining limerick it flowed well told the story.
The rhyme and rhythm are excellent this made for a very enjoyable read
thank you for the moments of enjoyment you gave me
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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Very clever and entertaining limerick it flowed well told the story.
The rhyme and rhythm are excellent this made for a very enjoyable read
thank you for the moments of enjoyment you gave me
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Thank you joe ruptak.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
haha it's yours. Call it whatever you wish. It does seem a bit complicated. But remember this is from one who thinks sonnets writing is complicated.
Your lines flow well, the rhymes are great, & this may catch on as the next 'new thing' in writing on FS.
The picture is great, too. I wish I could say more about the style, but I would sound like I don't know what I'm talking about because I don't.
Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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haha it's yours. Call it whatever you wish. It does seem a bit complicated. But remember this is from one who thinks sonnets writing is complicated.
Your lines flow well, the rhymes are great, & this may catch on as the next 'new thing' in writing on FS.
The picture is great, too. I wish I could say more about the style, but I would sound like I don't know what I'm talking about because I don't.
Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Thank you Jannypan for reading, and giving me your thoughts and reactions.
