Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Congratulations on the new book. I never thought that I would or could become interested in poetry, but of course, that is the case of many things we don't understand. These shorter forms of poetry are my favorites. Saying so much with so few words. Thanks for sharing. :-)
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Congratulations on the new book. I never thought that I would or could become interested in poetry, but of course, that is the case of many things we don't understand. These shorter forms of poetry are my favorites. Saying so much with so few words. Thanks for sharing. :-)
Comment Written 19-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you, Ric, you are very kind.
Gypsy
Comment from Mustang Patty
You've given the reader a great deal to digest with the presented image and words. I felt the thoughts of a sickness in the leaves and shuddered at the disease killing the plant. Has it truly been granted clemency, or just a reprieve?
Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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You've given the reader a great deal to digest with the presented image and words. I felt the thoughts of a sickness in the leaves and shuddered at the disease killing the plant. Has it truly been granted clemency, or just a reprieve?
Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 18-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words, Patty.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent nature haiku rendering Gypsy, indeed there is some hidden gems and its application to everyday life sewn into its hem, well done, my friend, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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This is an excellent nature haiku rendering Gypsy, indeed there is some hidden gems and its application to everyday life sewn into its hem, well done, my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 18-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much, Roy :) Happy Father's Day!
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Thank you Gypsy
Comment from Rasmine
Hello, Gypsy,
Yay! The club is starting again. I will check it out later on.
I like your haiku, it's sad -- I hope the tree doesn't suffer!
Have a great day! :)
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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Hello, Gypsy,
Yay! The club is starting again. I will check it out later on.
I like your haiku, it's sad -- I hope the tree doesn't suffer!
Have a great day! :)
Comment Written 18-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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Thank you, honey, it's like you to have compassion towards the tree :) I love your spirit.
Gypsy
Comment from Joan E.
Congratulations on your publishing projects on Amazon--the first anthology's cover is stunning. I admired your "sick tree" haiku and its pleading for "clemency". I felt very sorry for its plight. Sighs- Joan
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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Congratulations on your publishing projects on Amazon--the first anthology's cover is stunning. I admired your "sick tree" haiku and its pleading for "clemency". I felt very sorry for its plight. Sighs- Joan
Comment Written 18-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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Thank you, honey, it's like you to have compassion towards the tree :) I love your spirit.
Gypsy
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You sparked the connection with your evocative haiku. Smiles- Joan
Comment from Ulla
Hola quapa, this is beautiful. I really liked the great imagery of the sick/dying trees looking for help and ultimately for a reprieve. I'm still trying to get hold of the Anthology from Robyn, but she seems to have disappeared from the site, so I'll have to wait for the release on the European Amazon site. It also means I'll order only a couple of copies as it will be so much dearer.
I love your poem. Besitos. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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Hola quapa, this is beautiful. I really liked the great imagery of the sick/dying trees looking for help and ultimately for a reprieve. I'm still trying to get hold of the Anthology from Robyn, but she seems to have disappeared from the site, so I'll have to wait for the release on the European Amazon site. It also means I'll order only a couple of copies as it will be so much dearer.
I love your poem. Besitos. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 18-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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Robyn is on vacation, she will be back. I am so sorry about the waiting .... sigh... I will send her a message.
Thank you for the lovely review and excellent feedback. Gypsy hugs
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Thanks for doing that. I would so like to have a few more copies to give away to family and friends. Un besito
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Has the Governor called yet? Did my pardon come through? This is a very clever poem. I like clever writing. It shows that there's a brain behind the poem.
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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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Has the Governor called yet? Did my pardon come through? This is a very clever poem. I like clever writing. It shows that there's a brain behind the poem.
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the funny review and excellent feedback. Gypsy hugs
Comment from MizKat
Hi Gypsy Blue Rose,
The poem that you wrote was interesting to read. It's too bad that the
tree is sick. The picture of it still looks nice though.
Kat
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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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Hi Gypsy Blue Rose,
The poem that you wrote was interesting to read. It's too bad that the
tree is sick. The picture of it still looks nice though.
Kat
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Comment Written 18-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review and excellent feedback. Gypsy hugs
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Hi Gypsy,
You've made me happy to hear that my
review was lovely with an excellent feedback. I also liked your hugs.
Kat
