This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Veronica Talks to James"Veronica is sent back again
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Comment from frogbook
Well, there she goes and it's a lucky thing she told him! Not much time to waste and a great lead up to the end of the story. Another magic carpet ride courtesy of Miss Sandra!
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Well, there she goes and it's a lucky thing she told him! Not much time to waste and a great lead up to the end of the story. Another magic carpet ride courtesy of Miss Sandra!
Comment Written 30-May-2017
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Thank you, Joan! I love the magic carpet, lol. I'm really glad you enjoyed this part. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from mbroyles2
And off we go!
I came in at the end of the last one so I'm thrilled to get in on this one from the ground floor.
Veronica is such a lovely character.
Exciting storytelling!
Michael
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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And off we go!
I came in at the end of the last one so I'm thrilled to get in on this one from the ground floor.
Veronica is such a lovely character.
Exciting storytelling!
Michael
Comment Written 30-May-2017
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Thank you do much, Michael, for your lovely review, my friend! :) Sandra xx
Comment from Curly Girly
This time-travelling story sounds most mysterious. At least, her husband James believes her. But now she's off on another trip!
I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
One typo spotted:
"All I can say, is I hope your right,"
"All I can say, is I hope YOU'RE right,"
Nicole
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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This time-travelling story sounds most mysterious. At least, her husband James believes her. But now she's off on another trip!
I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
One typo spotted:
"All I can say, is I hope your right,"
"All I can say, is I hope YOU'RE right,"
Nicole
Comment Written 30-May-2017
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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Thank you for catching that, Nicole, I've been in and corrected it. She will have a hard time with this one now that she is married and has children. But, Veronica is very resourceful. Thank again, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from MelB
A great talk between the two of them. He was very understanding about her past. A fantastic way to end the chapter with her ending up in the future.
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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A great talk between the two of them. He was very understanding about her past. A fantastic way to end the chapter with her ending up in the future.
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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Thank you, Melissa! I do so appreciate you thoughts on this part and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :) Sandra xxx
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My pleasure:)
Comment from Leena
Loved reading this chapter as much as the previous one. Very very interesting flow of events. A reader would no doubt get glued. Now eager to know, what next:)
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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Loved reading this chapter as much as the previous one. Very very interesting flow of events. A reader would no doubt get glued. Now eager to know, what next:)
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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Thank you so very much, Leena, for this really lovely review. I do appreciate it! Big hugs! :) Sandra xx
Comment from pbomar1115
Veronica had the big worry of telling James and Ann about her unprepared pass away. She nervously tells James hoping he would understand the time traveling story. It worked out. At the end, I'm not sure if Veronica imagined her time travel back to her previous place or Veronica fears that lying on the floor will happen. This is interesting because you carefully crafted the scene with a lot of description, using various senses.
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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Veronica had the big worry of telling James and Ann about her unprepared pass away. She nervously tells James hoping he would understand the time traveling story. It worked out. At the end, I'm not sure if Veronica imagined her time travel back to her previous place or Veronica fears that lying on the floor will happen. This is interesting because you carefully crafted the scene with a lot of description, using various senses.
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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Thank you so much, my friend, for your lovely review. Your last sentence is the best compliment a writer could hope to receive, thank you! :) Sandra xx
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You're welcome.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend I am ready for veronica's next journey and I cannot wait to get into it I enjoyed this chapter and pleased James took things well. Well done once more regards Jill
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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Yes my friend I am ready for veronica's next journey and I cannot wait to get into it I enjoyed this chapter and pleased James took things well. Well done once more regards Jill
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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Oh, thank you so much, Jill! I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part and I really appreciate the 6 stars you've given it. Bless you, and a big hug! :) Sandra xxxx
Comment from Tpa
A marvelous chapter. Your words flowed beautifully. I enjoyed the concept of your story. This has been the first time reading your work, which I found both satisfying and entertaining.
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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A marvelous chapter. Your words flowed beautifully. I enjoyed the concept of your story. This has been the first time reading your work, which I found both satisfying and entertaining.
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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Thank you so much for your really lovely comments on my story, my friend. I really appreciate that you enjoyed reading it. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from alexisleech
My goodness, Veronica doesn't hang about, does she? It's so good to see you posting again, Sandra. I don't review much, but I know I'm going to enjoy this book as much as the last one!
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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My goodness, Veronica doesn't hang about, does she? It's so good to see you posting again, Sandra. I don't review much, but I know I'm going to enjoy this book as much as the last one!
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Thank you so much, my lovely friend. Those stars look lovely up there! Big hugs, and sloppy cheek kisses! :) xxx
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Such a treat to find you've posted a chapter, Sandra -
James is so understanding. Great interaction between the two.
And poor Ann with her mother's abilities.
aI see asleep had been mispelt - or is that intentional/
Blessings,
Margaret
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Such a treat to find you've posted a chapter, Sandra -
James is so understanding. Great interaction between the two.
And poor Ann with her mother's abilities.
aI see asleep had been mispelt - or is that intentional/
Blessings,
Margaret
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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No, it was a spelling mistake! Thanks for spotting it, Margaret. Ann will be fine, better than her mother as she grows up. Thanks for the lovely review, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
