My Photograph
5-7-5 contest just for fun20 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Your funny 5/7/5 lines connect smoothly have concrete images and your presentation is very funny and attractive. Good job!
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
Hello, my friend,
Your funny 5/7/5 lines connect smoothly have concrete images and your presentation is very funny and attractive. Good job!
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
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Thank you kindly, for your wonderful review. I appreciate you taking time to read this
Comment from Hitcher
ha, ha, I did very much enjoy the humour of your fun little 5/7/5 poem friend and I think your choice of artwork was perfect. Unfortunately I've seen that expression up close. Good luck!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
ha, ha, I did very much enjoy the humour of your fun little 5/7/5 poem friend and I think your choice of artwork was perfect. Unfortunately I've seen that expression up close. Good luck!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I'm happy you got a laugh. lol I still chuckle when I look at it, I'm sure glad others do too. :)
Comment from NHazelwood
The author pick the perfect caption for their prose. This is hilarious and very witty and well thought out! As the reader the line "I'm like a deer in headlights" creates in my mind similar events at family functions of the worst random pic with your mouth open only to see it later posted on Facebook. Well written!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
The author pick the perfect caption for their prose. This is hilarious and very witty and well thought out! As the reader the line "I'm like a deer in headlights" creates in my mind similar events at family functions of the worst random pic with your mouth open only to see it later posted on Facebook. Well written!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your review, I actually got a chuckle out of that. seeing your picture posted on facebook.:))
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Thank you! :)
Comment from Bill O'Bier
What can I say about selfies - "With the selfies, a photographer has finally found his place in a photograph." Thanks for a fun poem. Good luck in the contest.
Bill~
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
What can I say about selfies - "With the selfies, a photographer has finally found his place in a photograph." Thanks for a fun poem. Good luck in the contest.
Bill~
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Thank you Bill, for taking the time to read and review this.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun 5-7-5 poem. Most of us look like a scared deer when someone takes a photo of us unexpectedly. A very funny picture to complement your poem.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
A very well-written fun 5-7-5 poem. Most of us look like a scared deer when someone takes a photo of us unexpectedly. A very funny picture to complement your poem.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Thank you Sandra for you great review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I can identify with this fun poem, usually my eyes are red, as well as startled! You made me smile. Great art work too! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
I can identify with this fun poem, usually my eyes are red, as well as startled! You made me smile. Great art work too! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Thank you Dolly
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A very funny contest entry. That picture looks like a deer in the headlights, with headlights. Very clever. I hope you win.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
A very funny contest entry. That picture looks like a deer in the headlights, with headlights. Very clever. I hope you win.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Thank you
Comment from Heidi M
Haha! This is a funny 5-7-5 and so true! We may think we have just taken a great photo but the results claim otherwise. I love the picture you paired with it. Really cute!
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
Haha! This is a funny 5-7-5 and so true! We may think we have just taken a great photo but the results claim otherwise. I love the picture you paired with it. Really cute!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your review and taking time to read it. :)
Comment from Sixty70
Clever! I come from a long line of folks who make funny faces when faced with a camera. Glad I'm not the only one.
Best of luck in the contest. The chuckle-factor along means you will do well!
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
Clever! I come from a long line of folks who make funny faces when faced with a camera. Glad I'm not the only one.
Best of luck in the contest. The chuckle-factor along means you will do well!
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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That you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Janet Foor
Well you definitely made me smile. I have used that phrase many times but now when I say the words, I will remember this delightful picture and poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
Well you definitely made me smile. I have used that phrase many times but now when I say the words, I will remember this delightful picture and poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Thank you Janet :)