Snapdragon
The names of flowers amuse me.14 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine haiku of nature
with excellent imagery in snapdragons, fires, damsels
and great connection of all
A very good satori line
contrasting the previous images
Very well done
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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This is a fine haiku of nature
with excellent imagery in snapdragons, fires, damsels
and great connection of all
A very good satori line
contrasting the previous images
Very well done
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Thank you I always respect your opinion.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Nature is on the movement, I feel it at strong word visual imagery, in this Haiku, and good allegorical expression in flow of thoughts about snapdragon, I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Nature is on the movement, I feel it at strong word visual imagery, in this Haiku, and good allegorical expression in flow of thoughts about snapdragon, I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Thank you for such positive comments.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
I really enjoyed reading this Nature 5-7-5 titled Snapdragon. It is sweet and innocent and brings a smile to the reader. Not all dragons are fierce and fire breathing. Great job and good luck in the competition. ~DD
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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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I really enjoyed reading this Nature 5-7-5 titled Snapdragon. It is sweet and innocent and brings a smile to the reader. Not all dragons are fierce and fire breathing. Great job and good luck in the competition. ~DD
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Thank you for such a positive and encouraging review.
Comment from Sixty70
Yes, the snapdragon has a scary name but isn't particularly scary in the garden. I remember snapdragons that my mother planted every year, topping the new spring perennials. Lovely poem. I like that the flower 'scares no damsels.'
Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Yes, the snapdragon has a scary name but isn't particularly scary in the garden. I remember snapdragons that my mother planted every year, topping the new spring perennials. Lovely poem. I like that the flower 'scares no damsels.'
Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind comments.
