Comment from William Ross

Excellent

This is a wonderful veterans day acrostic on freedom. Great job and write in honor of our servicemen. Good luck on this and have a great day.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016

Thank you for your review, comments and best wishes...................................

Comment from gene roush

Excellent

This has a nice and simple message while honoring the fallen warriors and the families that have given life, love, and pain for our nation.
Well done--good luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing
Gene

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016

Thanks you for your review and comments they are greatly appreciated. Blessings.....................

Comment from winnona

Excellent

A well -written contest entry. I think you have done well completing the challenge of the contest. Your artwork and background color completed the piece well. Good luck.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016

Winnona,

Thanks so much for your review................................

Comment from Justin Yhoung

Good

The concept of freedom is so powerful, so foundational to our culture. You have taken a style and woven the truth--you have made it clear what freedom is, you've defined what it stands for. Good job, keep up the good work.

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 Comment Written 03-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2016

Justin,

Thanks so much for your review and welcome to Fanstory, looking forward in reviewing you work. When giving a four star rating we on Fanstory must tell the poet what needs to be improved in order to receive a higher rating. If you have any suggestions to give in order to make this better please share and it would be greatly appreciated. I am sure you will enjoy your stay, as we are a family and help each other to becomes better poets and writer.. Thanks so much my friend. Blessings and have a wonderful day. Portia

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful acrostic poem about freedom you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. hugs, Teri

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 Comment Written 02-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2016

Teri,

Thank you for your review and very kind comments. Blessings....................Portia