Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

I pondered this one for a while, Tom. Sometimes it seems crazy, and ready for a wreck...others like you say, a dance.
Great job on this, your imagery always pops for me.
Thanks for sharing.
M

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 Comment Written 20-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2016

Thank you Maureen. Yes, it is a wonder. I am so pleased that my poetry pops. I'll try to keep it popping.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Yours is an excellent, well composed Heroic Rispetto, Mr. "T", and the incident which you say inspired it is one I'm quite sure we are all too familiar with.
Rush hour traffic, UGH!
Well done, sir!
~Dean

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 Comment Written 20-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2016

Thank you Dean. You could likely describe it in more macabre way. Dead man's curve, or something.

reply by Dean Kuch on 20-Sep-2016

My pleasure, Tom.
~Dean