Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 69 "Soldiers"Dawn of Chaos
26 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Yes all soldiers should be honored. Those that fight in war and those that fight the daily battles to life their lives. It seems the grandfather and grandson in the picture are waiting for someone. Are they waiting for their angel?
Keep writing
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Yes all soldiers should be honored. Those that fight in war and those that fight the daily battles to life their lives. It seems the grandfather and grandson in the picture are waiting for someone. Are they waiting for their angel?
Keep writing
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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I hope we all are, good or bad, having our place yields its reason, believing even you to be an angel, trapped in flesh suit. Thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
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You're welcome.
Joan
Comment from Marjorie Burghdoff-Banks
Great job, love any and all tribute to military. 'Soldiers tower tall silent stone statues' this is so true, soldiers standing tall and silent, always at attention, always ready to defend. Good job, truly enjoyed this.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Great job, love any and all tribute to military. 'Soldiers tower tall silent stone statues' this is so true, soldiers standing tall and silent, always at attention, always ready to defend. Good job, truly enjoyed this.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Glad certain aspects in this write were captivating to your interests, thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
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The Army Mom in me appreciates all verse, comments, etc regarding the military .
Comment from bmethner
Very strong message of challenges met. The irregular end and internal rhyme add to the difficult message of the poem. Word choices of "storms" and "rages" bring the somber note to the piece. The light of the last stanza sinks deep into the heart.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Very strong message of challenges met. The irregular end and internal rhyme add to the difficult message of the poem. Word choices of "storms" and "rages" bring the somber note to the piece. The light of the last stanza sinks deep into the heart.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Your statement said makes me thirsty to know more about this write, being the writer somewhat puzzled by views, captured pleasure I myself missed in this work. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching sentiments.
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That's the intriguing thing about writing, you never know what the reader will see in it. It is fun to find out
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Good anomalous rhymes, flow of thoughts flair and nice conceptual growth, expressive manipulation of thoughts; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Good anomalous rhymes, flow of thoughts flair and nice conceptual growth, expressive manipulation of thoughts; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Glad aspects were found appealing, thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from heavenempress
beautiful piece of work. am glad to reading a rich and powerful work of poetry. you have a very good command of English and your words mean you really studied or have experienced life of a soldier. Keep it up!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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beautiful piece of work. am glad to reading a rich and powerful work of poetry. you have a very good command of English and your words mean you really studied or have experienced life of a soldier. Keep it up!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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The latter part yields truth, given other aspect something attempting to develop, thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
Comment from Dr. Nad
Thank you for sharing your kaleidoscope of uniqueness with us. You made me laugh as I traveled down, (Or up,) the litany of literary options that awaited the optical delights of the so inclined. Then . . . to my amazement, you continued to keep me in the complete dark as to what you were trying to say. I anticipated a soldering tip. LOL Embrace the Love from above.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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Thank you for sharing your kaleidoscope of uniqueness with us. You made me laugh as I traveled down, (Or up,) the litany of literary options that awaited the optical delights of the so inclined. Then . . . to my amazement, you continued to keep me in the complete dark as to what you were trying to say. I anticipated a soldering tip. LOL Embrace the Love from above.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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No personal beliefs of faith, actions recorded in Text about angels, given task here among us. The write is under revision, pleased to hear aspects were captured by your read, thanking dispute for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from Maria Millsaps
I like the concept of your poem and think it is interesting...are you referring to Armageddon, the final battle, or are you referring to Law Enforcement and National Security?
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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I like the concept of your poem and think it is interesting...are you referring to Armageddon, the final battle, or are you referring to Law Enforcement and National Security?
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2019
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More like angel chosen as watchers, ruling galaxies placing view to cities, in God's hall. Glad aspects in this write were found appealing to your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from AdaJulie
Fantastic job. I do not think enough can be said about the topi you write. You write well And with knowledge! I appreciate your style. Well done my friend.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Fantastic job. I do not think enough can be said about the topi you write. You write well And with knowledge! I appreciate your style. Well done my friend.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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I appreciate your statement, given times of doubts about my writes, trying to improve overall presentation. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, both on the actual battlefield and at home within the spiritual realm, we do face daily battles but God is with us and for us.
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"their deeds guides sheep to God's light. " (guide) because deeds is a plural subject)
You have "God justice" and "God laws" and I wondered if you meant "God's justice" and "God's laws."
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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Yes, both on the actual battlefield and at home within the spiritual realm, we do face daily battles but God is with us and for us.
Comments:
"their deeds guides sheep to God's light. " (guide) because deeds is a plural subject)
You have "God justice" and "God laws" and I wondered if you meant "God's justice" and "God's laws."
Comment Written 29-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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Excellent evaluations of this write. Thanking you for your shout plus your generous rate.
Comment from Earl Corp
Are you saying we are all soldiers in the fight of life? Im not a poetry guy so im not sure what style you were using. Though it didn'rhyme the words you strung together made sense. I wasn' t enthralled seeing the word `sheep` in a poem titled `soldiers` just my opinion, maybe i took it wrong.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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Are you saying we are all soldiers in the fight of life? Im not a poetry guy so im not sure what style you were using. Though it didn'rhyme the words you strung together made sense. I wasn' t enthralled seeing the word `sheep` in a poem titled `soldiers` just my opinion, maybe i took it wrong.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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An opinion but yes in life we all are soldiers. You gave many good viewpoints about this read. I even have these questions. Thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.