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Viewing comments for Chapter 417 "The Bridge to Pike Island"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from brenda bickers
Hi TREISCHEL,
this is a wonderful piece of history and right on the door step which you nothing about. It is amazing what is right in front of us can go unnoticed for years. Thank heaven you found it and shared it with all of us. I loved the flow and the rhythm, a very smooth read.
Brenda:))x
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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Hi TREISCHEL,
this is a wonderful piece of history and right on the door step which you nothing about. It is amazing what is right in front of us can go unnoticed for years. Thank heaven you found it and shared it with all of us. I loved the flow and the rhythm, a very smooth read.
Brenda:))x
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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Thank you Brenda. Yes, amazing isn't it. I gave been in that park many times, but never down that particular path.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is really interesting Tom. You are so sweet to fill us in on this Historical site. I will never get to visit there except like this. Thank you. Your balled poem is very well done.Beautiful picture. xx Nancy
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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This is really interesting Tom. You are so sweet to fill us in on this Historical site. I will never get to visit there except like this. Thank you. Your balled poem is very well done.Beautiful picture. xx Nancy
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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Thank you Nancy.
Comment from patcelaw
Tom, I truly enjoyed this poem and the history that you gave in the poem and your notes. You surely do have a number of points of interest in your area. Blessings, Patricia
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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Tom, I truly enjoyed this poem and the history that you gave in the poem and your notes. You surely do have a number of points of interest in your area. Blessings, Patricia
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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Thank you Patricia. Yes, I love it here.
Comment from Liberty Justice
Very interesting and amusing story about explorer, Pike. Seems he make great discoveries around and in the Mississippi River. Poet looks like finds these events very interesting. That photo is so lovely and picturesque. Check out mine, also today. liberty justice
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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Very interesting and amusing story about explorer, Pike. Seems he make great discoveries around and in the Mississippi River. Poet looks like finds these events very interesting. That photo is so lovely and picturesque. Check out mine, also today. liberty justice
Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2016
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Thank you Liberty. Ok, I will.
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Don't forget check mine out, also today. liberty justice Good luck contest
Comment from enitsalemap
This should be written on the plaque, it is so perfect in ballad form. You should get out your banjo ( or guitar) and build a campfire and sing this sucker. I don't usually find historical poetry fun, but everything about it was right on the money, honey. The rhymes were good and the meter gave it music. Reminds me of cowboy poetry a little. Good, good, good.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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This should be written on the plaque, it is so perfect in ballad form. You should get out your banjo ( or guitar) and build a campfire and sing this sucker. I don't usually find historical poetry fun, but everything about it was right on the money, honey. The rhymes were good and the meter gave it music. Reminds me of cowboy poetry a little. Good, good, good.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Thank you enitsalemap for the great review, all your enthusiasm, and also those stars.
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you are welcome.
Comment from Dr. Nad
The Bridge to Pike Island Is an excellent form with marvelous flow and an easy read. You have written it such that you are telling the story without verbal gymnastics and linguistic contrivances. You just plain said it like it is and it rhymed! I like it when it rhymes! LOL you don't have time to read my poem, let it rhyme, but if you did, you might like it. Thanks so much for sharing. May God bless you!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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The Bridge to Pike Island Is an excellent form with marvelous flow and an easy read. You have written it such that you are telling the story without verbal gymnastics and linguistic contrivances. You just plain said it like it is and it rhymed! I like it when it rhymes! LOL you don't have time to read my poem, let it rhyme, but if you did, you might like it. Thanks so much for sharing. May God bless you!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Thank you Dr. bad. I appreciate the review and those stars. I will try to have a look at yours.
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You are most welcome.
Embrace the love from above!
The Poem I referenced is entitled:
" let it rhyme"
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem, and an interesting discovery of the beautiful old cement bridge which dated back to 1805. An excellent photo as well.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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A very well-written poem, and an interesting discovery of the beautiful old cement bridge which dated back to 1805. An excellent photo as well.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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The bridge is fairly recent. The island tale goes to 1805. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
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I must have misread the facts. It s still a beautiful bridge.
Comment from jaybird1
A beautiful and moving piece of historical nostalgia with great rhyme and smooth flowing
cadence.A splendid presentation, both with pictures and poetically
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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A beautiful and moving piece of historical nostalgia with great rhyme and smooth flowing
cadence.A splendid presentation, both with pictures and poetically
Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Thank you jaybird1.
Comment from DALLAS01
Enjoyed the history lesson in a poem. The poem itself has a lovely flow and the rhyme unforced. The author notes were very informative. Thank you for sharing.
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Enjoyed the history lesson in a poem. The poem itself has a lovely flow and the rhyme unforced. The author notes were very informative. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Thank you Dallas.
Comment from foxangie123
I wanna go there right this minute after reading your poem. You have a way of doing that to readers you know. You should be a CEO of promotions, seriously. Very nice.
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I wanna go there right this minute after reading your poem. You have a way of doing that to readers you know. You should be a CEO of promotions, seriously. Very nice.
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2016
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Thank you foxangie. You are so sweet to say. I spore irate your review very much.
