Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 407 "White Reflections"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from royowen
A magnificent work devoted to a great bird, one of God's creatures, you've spent a great deal of time on this wonderfully scribed information, the poem itself is written in skilful, well crafted style, the wording is elegant and smoothly delivered, great imagery and purpose in the work,well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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A magnificent work devoted to a great bird, one of God's creatures, you've spent a great deal of time on this wonderfully scribed information, the poem itself is written in skilful, well crafted style, the wording is elegant and smoothly delivered, great imagery and purpose in the work,well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 24-May-2016
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate your review and comments.
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Most welcome
Comment from P1
a lovely tribute to a beautiful bird.
your poem certainly did it justice
i saw thee birds in australia and they
are fascinating. pleasure to read and
review your words
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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a lovely tribute to a beautiful bird.
your poem certainly did it justice
i saw thee birds in australia and they
are fascinating. pleasure to read and
review your words
Comment Written 24-May-2016
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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Thank you Paige. They are magnificent birds.
Comment from patcelaw
Treischel, I don't think I have seen this format before, but i like it very much. The great egret is a wonderful picture of beauty in flight. Blessing for a good day. Patricia
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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Treischel, I don't think I have seen this format before, but i like it very much. The great egret is a wonderful picture of beauty in flight. Blessing for a good day. Patricia
Comment Written 24-May-2016
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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Thank you Patricia.
Comment from jusylee72
Such a lovely description of this regal bird. I loved it and the picture is so noteworthy. Nature poems are so real and validated by poets like you . I hope you are having a great day.
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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Such a lovely description of this regal bird. I loved it and the picture is so noteworthy. Nature poems are so real and validated by poets like you . I hope you are having a great day.
Comment Written 24-May-2016
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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Thank you jusylee, I will have a very fine day.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A beautiful poem for a beautiful bird. The poem reflects the photo and vice versa. Both excellent master pieces. Interesting informative author notes.
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A beautiful poem for a beautiful bird. The poem reflects the photo and vice versa. Both excellent master pieces. Interesting informative author notes.
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Comment Written 24-May-2016
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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Thank you Sandra. For a wonderful re view.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, treischel, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful poem about the egret that commands an audience. i like the information that you gave in your poetry about the egret's habits. i enjoyed reading the notes as wel;l
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this is an excellent write, treischel, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful poem about the egret that commands an audience. i like the information that you gave in your poetry about the egret's habits. i enjoyed reading the notes as wel;l
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Comment Written 24-May-2016
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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Thank you sweetwoodjax, I am pleased you liked both the poem and the notes.
