Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I really like triolets, and your did not disappoint. Your lines flow smoothly. The format for the triolet is followed.

Your picture is perfect--it does remind me that a bear could be up there.

Thanks for the notes too. They are very informative.

You are great as a photographer and author. I enjoy how you combine the two.

Good job and thanks for sharing Jan

 Comment Written 12-May-2016

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reply by the author on 12-May-2016

Thank you Jan. I appreciate you review, as akways.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A great Triolet it sure looks like s bear up in that tree. Nature can tell us so many stories if you just look around to see what she shows us. Great capture.

 Comment Written 12-May-2016

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reply by the author on 12-May-2016

Thank you Sandra. Yes, it's amazing what you can see.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is a fun little poem and it is written in perfect triolet form. It sure does look like a bear:)

Good luck in the contest.

teresa

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 Comment Written 12-May-2016

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reply by the author on 12-May-2016

Thank you Teresa.

Comment from brenda bickers

Excellent

Hi TREISCHEL
as soon as I looked at the picture that was the first thing that came into my head. It really does look like a bear. How spooky to see this if you were out late at night, I am laughing at the thought of so many people turning on their heels and running, unaware it is a tree they are running from.
I have heard that strange things happen in your neck of the woods with the swamps and gnarly trees. How exciting. Great poem.
Brenda:))x

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 Comment Written 12-May-2016

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reply by the author on 12-May-2016

Thank you Brenda. That's is a funny thought.