Little Poems
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
As always well written flawless poetry. Very creative with the colorful vowels pointed out. Any food or drink is always a successful business idea.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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As always well written flawless poetry. Very creative with the colorful vowels pointed out. Any food or drink is always a successful business idea.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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Thank you Sandra. So true, but location is also very important.
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Off course the quality of the product will be a factor to stay in business.
Comment from William Ross
That's great not many left out there today. great job on this never seen or heard of this type poem before. Great, thanks for the share and have a great day. neat might have to put my brain to work.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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That's great not many left out there today. great job on this never seen or heard of this type poem before. Great, thanks for the share and have a great day. neat might have to put my brain to work.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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Thank you William. Give it a go.
Comment from robyn corum
Okay, Tom.
As much as I appreciate this unique poem you've offered, this just looks like a bottle of Advil to me! Hahaha.
But good on you!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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Okay, Tom.
As much as I appreciate this unique poem you've offered, this just looks like a bottle of Advil to me! Hahaha.
But good on you!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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Thank you Robyn. Incoułd use one now too. Lol.
Comment from humpwhistle
I love the aeiou --and sometimes--y construction. Never heard of vowelogram.
Honestly? Sometimes I wonder if poets are really 'puzzlers' in disguise. I get the feeling that solving the puzzle is more important than the message. That's okay with me. I'm a puzzler from way back. Still, I wonder if it's an observation worth noting. What do you think?
I know I'm old fashioned, but I find the multi-colored type distracting. Don't mind me.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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I love the aeiou --and sometimes--y construction. Never heard of vowelogram.
Honestly? Sometimes I wonder if poets are really 'puzzlers' in disguise. I get the feeling that solving the puzzle is more important than the message. That's okay with me. I'm a puzzler from way back. Still, I wonder if it's an observation worth noting. What do you think?
I know I'm old fashioned, but I find the multi-colored type distracting. Don't mind me.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 19-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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Thank you Lee. The joy is more in the challenge, it's true. Didn't think the idea would be fully grasped without the color.
Comment from Joan E.
I figured you couldn't resist the challenge of the Vowelogram, but I did not expect you to spice it up as well! Lucky us that you found the popcorn-vending trolley to photograph and inspire you. Your colorful presentation is very appealing and the "smells" crossed the miles intact! Smiles- Joan
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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I figured you couldn't resist the challenge of the Vowelogram, but I did not expect you to spice it up as well! Lucky us that you found the popcorn-vending trolley to photograph and inspire you. Your colorful presentation is very appealing and the "smells" crossed the miles intact! Smiles- Joan
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2016
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Thank you so much Joan.
