Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

Whatever format this poem is written in,
it paints this mural with poetic and artistic
phrases that bring out the scents, the colors,
the very beauty that is all around.
Well done

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016

Thank you very much fastdigits, I appreciate your comments.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Treischel, this is a wonderful poem and I love the rhyming pattern. It makes a person stop and think about the rhyming. Nicely done. Have a good weekend. Patricia

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016

Thank you Patricia.

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

What a beautiful scenery in that picture. Wow I wanna go there. This is great writing filled with hope for a beautiful tomorrow. It truly is Darlin...

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016

Thank you foxangie, any time, it's just down the road a piece.

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

This is really an enchanting poem. It flows so very well and the rhyme is natural and unforced. The internal rhymes are really pleasant and add to the flow

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 Comment Written 12-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016

Thank you Douglas.

Comment from Dr. Nad

Excellent

Trail Transitions is such a lovely poem that follows such strict rules that I could never adhere to. With all your restrictions this piece seems flawlessly effortless. Thanks for sharing. May God bless you!

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 Comment Written 12-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016

Thank you Dr. Nad.

reply by Dr. Nad on 12-Mar-2016

You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!