Just Another Day
ABC Poetry - No set meter15 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Paul
i can't believe you went through the whole alphabet and still kept your theme together and flowing so well. Very impressive and very creative
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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i can't believe you went through the whole alphabet and still kept your theme together and flowing so well. Very impressive and very creative
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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Someone brought to my attention the committee might not like that because an alphabet poem has it's own name but I really started out just doing an ABC it just got away from me. Ah well I like it, LOL Thanks for the kind review.
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Ahh well - the poem is good so who cares about the committee
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. Yep, you got a little carried away but so what. It read very nicely and I enjoyed it. I'm not a poet but I know whether or not I like something I read. Good work.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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Excellent. Yep, you got a little carried away but so what. It read very nicely and I enjoyed it. I'm not a poet but I know whether or not I like something I read. Good work.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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Thanks so much for taking the time to respond. That means a lot.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Better checkthe rules of the poetry ABC contest. You wrote an abecedarian where all the letters of the alphabet are used. Don't know if they will disqualify it or not.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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Better checkthe rules of the poetry ABC contest. You wrote an abecedarian where all the letters of the alphabet are used. Don't know if they will disqualify it or not.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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Well I was just having fun with it, I don't know if they would disqualify it or not. They say you can have as many stanza as you want. Thanks for the stop by
Comment from Mary Wakeford
This is the second poem today I've read with Satan and a road referenced. Very interesting, if nothing else. Your poem has a great flow to it and it kept me engaged throughout. The only suggestion I would make is perhaps a pathway toward a rising sun or dawn to engage in the positive Dawn of Tomorrow, but I do understand the twilight photo with regard to the opening stanzas. Excellent.
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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This is the second poem today I've read with Satan and a road referenced. Very interesting, if nothing else. Your poem has a great flow to it and it kept me engaged throughout. The only suggestion I would make is perhaps a pathway toward a rising sun or dawn to engage in the positive Dawn of Tomorrow, but I do understand the twilight photo with regard to the opening stanzas. Excellent.
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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Sometimes the right artwork is not so easy to find. I liked how the roads converged in that photo, I think I was more interested in that aspect of it. I'll look around for others. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Domino 2
HI, Dawn.
I didn't 'get' the 'Path' line ending, but otherwise, this is a terrific ABC poem.
It flows extremely well, rather than many I've read that appear 'stuttery'.
Extremely positive and very entertaining.
Thought-provoking ending that I think implies that despite having a broad and thinking attitude, you/we all end up at the same destination, metaphorically.
Excellent.
Best wishes, Ray xx
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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HI, Dawn.
I didn't 'get' the 'Path' line ending, but otherwise, this is a terrific ABC poem.
It flows extremely well, rather than many I've read that appear 'stuttery'.
Extremely positive and very entertaining.
Thought-provoking ending that I think implies that despite having a broad and thinking attitude, you/we all end up at the same destination, metaphorically.
Excellent.
Best wishes, Ray xx
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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Darn, what I was attempting to do with that line is to say a decent path which leads them to hell but I'm getting interrupted by the sound. So how do I display that? Great understanding, you are so brilliant. Shhh don't let Ray know I said that.
;-) XX
