Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "It's Crazy"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
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Comment from Goyas
overall the poem was cute and a put a smile on my face. I enjoyed the way a flowed until the end. Poems, stories, letters ...... need to end great. My suggestion would be to end it with a rhyme as most of it rhymes and add a picture or color. good job.
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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overall the poem was cute and a put a smile on my face. I enjoyed the way a flowed until the end. Poems, stories, letters ...... need to end great. My suggestion would be to end it with a rhyme as most of it rhymes and add a picture or color. good job.
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2015
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Thank you, Goyas. I'm glad I looked for a picture, because I found a very nice one that warmed my heart.