Little Poems
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Dinosaurs have to exist. There is no doubt about it, where else would the bones come from. It is interesting how the Dinosaur life was and how it came to an end. Proof of existence is in the photograph and in the bones.
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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Dinosaurs have to exist. There is no doubt about it, where else would the bones come from. It is interesting how the Dinosaur life was and how it came to an end. Proof of existence is in the photograph and in the bones.
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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Thank you Sandra. Yes, I totally agree.
Comment from Amy Greta
I love your poem! It has such an original and unique subject, and it works so well in the strict (and to me...complicated!) format. I got so caught up in the content, I didn't even realize you were following a Gra Reformata style; you made it seem effortless, as your story/poem flowed so well. My favorite part is:
"For yes, their very bones proclaim the truth.
Lived Dinosaurs in planet's early youth."
I love how it rhymes and describes the earth as a child. And, I connected to this because I met some people who actually believe the world is a mere 6,000 years old (fundamentalists I believe(?) ) it was such a strange belief for me, I was fascinated listening to their ideas of how dinosaurs lived w humans, etcetera, so, yes, the dinosaur era is difficult for some to comprehend.
I really enjoyed your work!
Amy
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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I love your poem! It has such an original and unique subject, and it works so well in the strict (and to me...complicated!) format. I got so caught up in the content, I didn't even realize you were following a Gra Reformata style; you made it seem effortless, as your story/poem flowed so well. My favorite part is:
"For yes, their very bones proclaim the truth.
Lived Dinosaurs in planet's early youth."
I love how it rhymes and describes the earth as a child. And, I connected to this because I met some people who actually believe the world is a mere 6,000 years old (fundamentalists I believe(?) ) it was such a strange belief for me, I was fascinated listening to their ideas of how dinosaurs lived w humans, etcetera, so, yes, the dinosaur era is difficult for some to comprehend.
I really enjoyed your work!
Amy
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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Thank you very much Amy. Amazing that some think that way.
