Stories of the Dreamtime
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "The Desert Rose"Aboriginal myths and legends.
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Comment from Jean Lutz
I am familiar with the Desert Rose and I think I have even written about it. For me your writing stirred my Christian faith and how in eternity we will dwell together by the Tree of Life.
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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I am familiar with the Desert Rose and I think I have even written about it. For me your writing stirred my Christian faith and how in eternity we will dwell together by the Tree of Life.
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Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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Hello Jeanie with the silver hair; it is a marvellous tree, takes ages to grow. In Singapore, under climate controlled conditions, they grow to 30ft tall! Thanks for reading my dear friend. Hugs, Kay.
Comment from Lovinia
Hello Kay
I love your dreamtime stories. Hard work doing the dialogue I imagine, at least it is for me. A great story, well told. At least Jabiru got his story told ... such inquisitive children, as always with a story they are savouring. A lovely tale and so romantic, yet sad ... and happy, the lover's entwined forever. Families can make life so difficult ... all the laws and rules. One would think they would be happy for their children to be happy with someone they love. I guess we women are still chattel... in almost every race. Great work. Well done. Hugs - Lovi xoxo
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"Jabiru stirred on his legs and bad" -- "bade" ?
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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Hello Kay
I love your dreamtime stories. Hard work doing the dialogue I imagine, at least it is for me. A great story, well told. At least Jabiru got his story told ... such inquisitive children, as always with a story they are savouring. A lovely tale and so romantic, yet sad ... and happy, the lover's entwined forever. Families can make life so difficult ... all the laws and rules. One would think they would be happy for their children to be happy with someone they love. I guess we women are still chattel... in almost every race. Great work. Well done. Hugs - Lovi xoxo
Typo:
"Jabiru stirred on his legs and bad" -- "bade" ?
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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Thanks so much Lovi. Took ages to translate. I will look at it, can't put proper English in, would be silly. How are you? Blessings mate. Big Hugs XXX
Comment from country ranch writer
NICE WORK UP FOR THIS IT IS A NICE LOVE STORY OF TWO LOVERS BEGGING TO BE TOGETHER IN THE AFTER LIFE OF THE DESERT ROSE FOR LOVERS
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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NICE WORK UP FOR THIS IT IS A NICE LOVE STORY OF TWO LOVERS BEGGING TO BE TOGETHER IN THE AFTER LIFE OF THE DESERT ROSE FOR LOVERS
Comment Written 04-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2015
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Hello my friend, long time no hear from you? How are you going? Thanks for dropping by, glad you liked my story. Love, Kay XX
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HI HOPE ALL IS WELL WITH YOU MY HUBBY HAS SOME HEALTH ISSUES SO I WILL BE POPPING IN FROM TIME TO TIME GLAD TO SEE YOU ON HERE
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Been writing on the site for seven years now. I think I must be addicted! I'm OK. Just turned 70! Love, Kay.
