Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "Haunted House"Dawn of Chaos
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Comment from harleyangelbrat
I remember a similar house when I was a kid. Sometimes they are so fascinating and intriguing. You've written this well and described your situation with great expressions. I enjoyed reading this very much. God bless you!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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I remember a similar house when I was a kid. Sometimes they are so fascinating and intriguing. You've written this well and described your situation with great expressions. I enjoyed reading this very much. God bless you!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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Your comment pleasing to me and suddenly believable to me. Thanking you for generous rate and inspiring thoughts.
Comment from Cletus Hardiman
This is a nice piece of work and I enjoyed reading it. Since I left the site about 3 or 4 years ago, I come back on to find all sorts of new writers. Drop by and see me at my site sometime! I'll keep the lights on for you! LOL Cletus ( Clete ) Hardiman
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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This is a nice piece of work and I enjoyed reading it. Since I left the site about 3 or 4 years ago, I come back on to find all sorts of new writers. Drop by and see me at my site sometime! I'll keep the lights on for you! LOL Cletus ( Clete ) Hardiman
Comment Written 16-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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Thanking you for generous rate and invitation we will meet and by remembering hopeful find delights in your efforts as well.
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You are so welcome! Clete
Comment from Joyce Long
No, way! This is a true story? With your notes, I had to read this again. I can understand that you or your cousin were not ready to enter the house. Surely, someone must have been having a party. Did you ever find out what was really going on. "house suddenly had appeared and altered." I do believe in ghosts, but a ghost house. Interesting.
I didn't see any errors or corrections to be made.
Joyce 10-16-15
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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No, way! This is a true story? With your notes, I had to read this again. I can understand that you or your cousin were not ready to enter the house. Surely, someone must have been having a party. Did you ever find out what was really going on. "house suddenly had appeared and altered." I do believe in ghosts, but a ghost house. Interesting.
I didn't see any errors or corrections to be made.
Joyce 10-16-15
Comment Written 16-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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All real. How we got to this lite house without hearing or seeing anything baffling. But suddenly in front witnessing moments, then black again. Glad this work pleased somewhat. Thanking you for generous rate and beloved comments.
Comment from Nosha17
Creepy house, I would have run! I didn't know your poetry wasn't gory, I apologise for not reviewing before. Ghosts are ok, to a certain extent! This was a very interesting experience, especially as you relayed the flashback. Well chosen words and great story line. I found a few things: Line 6, alongside, line 23, We'd all be. Line 51, ?hidden. Enjoyable read Faye
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015
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Creepy house, I would have run! I didn't know your poetry wasn't gory, I apologise for not reviewing before. Ghosts are ok, to a certain extent! This was a very interesting experience, especially as you relayed the flashback. Well chosen words and great story line. I found a few things: Line 6, alongside, line 23, We'd all be. Line 51, ?hidden. Enjoyable read Faye
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015
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Good shout glad you found some interests in this work. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed response.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Nicely done work, very descriptive and well narrated with details. Yes, there are times your mind conjure some imaginative picture of a thing but at other times they are very real. May be this was your experience.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015
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Nicely done work, very descriptive and well narrated with details. Yes, there are times your mind conjure some imaginative picture of a thing but at other times they are very real. May be this was your experience.
ola thomas
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015
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You will be surprised what happens in life and how many are affected when I arrived the problem was here. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
You have an unique style and I can tell English is your second language, it reads almost as if you used an online translator program, but you deliver the message well enough that I can tell what you were saying. I love scary stuff, anything in the horror genre. Good job over all!
~gypsy
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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Hello :)
You have an unique style and I can tell English is your second language, it reads almost as if you used an online translator program, but you deliver the message well enough that I can tell what you were saying. I love scary stuff, anything in the horror genre. Good job over all!
~gypsy
Comment Written 12-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2015
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No. I am the result of the USA school system standard so punch them robbers for graduating me without representing your taxes. Thanking you for great sound out about flaws glad some joy was found outside perfection.
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Yes, TPAC, I understand about the education system's short comings. You are doing well considering that you are out expressing yourself and improving your grammar. Don't give up! Good job
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello TPAC,
quite the story of the house from the past had no electric now in the present changed --
to be all lite up and the spirits of the family that once lived in the house are having a party..
Creepy
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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Hello TPAC,
quite the story of the house from the past had no electric now in the present changed --
to be all lite up and the spirits of the family that once lived in the house are having a party..
Creepy
Gert
Comment Written 12-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
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Only father at time was dead, I can only state what happened -maybe not as smooth as should be said. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating thoughts.
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Thank you for telling me
Smiles
Gert
Comment from Writeronboard
This is a spooky story and I don't blame you or your cousin for not entering the house. I'm a big fan of ghost stories and the supernatural but I know my limits. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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This is a spooky story and I don't blame you or your cousin for not entering the house. I'm a big fan of ghost stories and the supernatural but I know my limits. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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Glad you found interests in this work. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating thoughts.
Comment from ellie6
The things that scare us when we are children usually have a reasonable explanation in the cold light of day. Well, nearly always.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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The things that scare us when we are children usually have a reasonable explanation in the cold light of day. Well, nearly always.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2015
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A thought for considerations, event more baffling than frightening. Thanking you for generous rate with comforting comments.
Comment from Curly Girly
This tells an interesting personal tale about an old house that was haunted. I can tell English is not your first language, but I think you did well. I could understand the story.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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This tells an interesting personal tale about an old house that was haunted. I can tell English is not your first language, but I think you did well. I could understand the story.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Yeah, I am an alien to the language good to see taxes paid results, again another over generous rate and comment, will try to apply better presentation. Thank you for welcomed thoughts.