Animated Stills
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
After reading your author notes, the idea that this stone has human characteristics is very believable. Good job with the rhyme. The flow is excellent. No change. Your picture is great and even more special since you took it.
You should teach a sonnet form class. All of your work has been enjoyable. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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After reading your author notes, the idea that this stone has human characteristics is very believable. Good job with the rhyme. The flow is excellent. No change. Your picture is great and even more special since you took it.
You should teach a sonnet form class. All of your work has been enjoyable. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Thank you jannypan. What a wonderful compliment.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is very creative. Your poem and the image go together so well. Love the use of rhyme. The flow of your poem was perfect. Well done.
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reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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This is very creative. Your poem and the image go together so well. Love the use of rhyme. The flow of your poem was perfect. Well done.
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Comment Written 22-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Thank you very much Michael.
