Dressed to Kill
How fast that time goes!14 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi....
Beautifully penned. You're so right about how fast time flies. Hard to believe they were able so small. Before we know it, they're out on their own 'competing' in life.
My baby boys are 44 and 46! Good luck in the contest. Great entry.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*;*)
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Hi....
Beautifully penned. You're so right about how fast time flies. Hard to believe they were able so small. Before we know it, they're out on their own 'competing' in life.
My baby boys are 44 and 46! Good luck in the contest. Great entry.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*;*)
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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My other baby boy is 41 ... this one's 18 Jax ... yes, it flies ...
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good job!
poem,
-excellent rhythm
-action flows smoothly
-descriptive language used
-excellent format and picture
-excellent character development
-held my interest all the way to the end
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Good job!
poem,
-excellent rhythm
-action flows smoothly
-descriptive language used
-excellent format and picture
-excellent character development
-held my interest all the way to the end
Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Thanks so much GPR!
Comment from petalangela
Delightful to read and so very true. He is at the kiss I am great. Oh dear I just kissed myself you are TOOO late,
Your words sum up a true picture of a youngster trying to step into manhood but still not quite if it's time to do that
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reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Delightful to read and so very true. He is at the kiss I am great. Oh dear I just kissed myself you are TOOO late,
Your words sum up a true picture of a youngster trying to step into manhood but still not quite if it's time to do that
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Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Thanks so much p.a! :)
Comment from royowen
I loved your take on the strength and beauty of youth, a very narcissistic time in one's life, a photo image of my youth, saying I was once beset by that process, don't worry he'll be like you one day! Well done, well written, in great expressive, descriptive language that manages to illuminate the narrative, well done, beautifully written, blessings, Roy.
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reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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I loved your take on the strength and beauty of youth, a very narcissistic time in one's life, a photo image of my youth, saying I was once beset by that process, don't worry he'll be like you one day! Well done, well written, in great expressive, descriptive language that manages to illuminate the narrative, well done, beautifully written, blessings, Roy.
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Comment Written 15-May-2015
reply by the author on 16-May-2015
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Thank you Roy!
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Most welcome