When Blood Collides
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Tricked "A family's love is tested.
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Comment from joann r romei
ut oh, you left us hanging, to bad your mom didnt go to the other place, she would have had a tom of company, cant wait to hear more.
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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ut oh, you left us hanging, to bad your mom didnt go to the other place, she would have had a tom of company, cant wait to hear more.
Comment Written 04-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Yes, I wonder how things would have turned out if she had moved there.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Oh, no. She's marrying Jeff! He must be amazing in bed, since he's got little else going for him.
Glad Mom was no longer a burden to you, and I do think they are better off with some independence, doing for themselves as long as possible. My mom moved in with us when she sold her house. A year later, we all agreed she (and we) would be happier if she had her own condo. So we pitched in to buy one nearby, and she loved it. While she lived, she was happy there and made friends, so it was worth the money we lost when we couldn't sell it after the housing crash. When you're old and have nothing but death to look forward to, you shouldn't be stuck in a senior care center. That's just my feeling, and it was hers too.
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Oh, no. She's marrying Jeff! He must be amazing in bed, since he's got little else going for him.
Glad Mom was no longer a burden to you, and I do think they are better off with some independence, doing for themselves as long as possible. My mom moved in with us when she sold her house. A year later, we all agreed she (and we) would be happier if she had her own condo. So we pitched in to buy one nearby, and she loved it. While she lived, she was happy there and made friends, so it was worth the money we lost when we couldn't sell it after the housing crash. When you're old and have nothing but death to look forward to, you shouldn't be stuck in a senior care center. That's just my feeling, and it was hers too.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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LOL My thoughts exactly about Jeff. He had to have something going for him. Lucky you with a mother who was sociable. My mother's let her whole life revolve around me. It wasn't fair and placed a burden on me to make her happy. At least that's what I felt back then.
Comment from boxergirl
I am glad that your mom found a place to move, even thought the assisted living place sounded better.
And now you get to help with wedding plans. Busy, busy. 8-)
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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I am glad that your mom found a place to move, even thought the assisted living place sounded better.
And now you get to help with wedding plans. Busy, busy. 8-)
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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THanks, BG. It will be nice to write a positive chapter.
Comment from mermaids
Oh a wedding is in the future. Love the part about your father contacting your mother after he died. It is a comforting feeling to believe that love ones can contact us. Again, your story held my interest and flows smoothly. Can't wait for the nuptials.
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Oh a wedding is in the future. Love the part about your father contacting your mother after he died. It is a comforting feeling to believe that love ones can contact us. Again, your story held my interest and flows smoothly. Can't wait for the nuptials.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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It was the most unusual wedding I've ever been too.
Comment from walbc
Beautifully crafted prose as usual.
Your story line is moving forward and remains interesting.
Dialogue is exceptionally true to life.
Warm regards, Wendy
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Beautifully crafted prose as usual.
Your story line is moving forward and remains interesting.
Dialogue is exceptionally true to life.
Warm regards, Wendy
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Thanks, Wendy. I know it's hard to jump into the middle.
Comment from Eigle Rull
As always, this well written chapter was interesting and held my attention very well. I loved the story of her departed husband having removed the stain from the dress. I believe in afterlife also, my friend. And now, perhaps you can find the right dress for a wedding huh? Best wishes. I enjoyed this chapter very much.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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As always, this well written chapter was interesting and held my attention very well. I loved the story of her departed husband having removed the stain from the dress. I believe in afterlife also, my friend. And now, perhaps you can find the right dress for a wedding huh? Best wishes. I enjoyed this chapter very much.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Thanks, Eigle, for your wonderful feedback on this.
Comment from Fridayauthor
I enjoyed reading this posting. The personalities of the various characters come across very clearly and the details you write makes the scene come alive.
The chat with the other world was an interesting twist. It sets up future postings very nicely.
Thank you.
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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I enjoyed reading this posting. The personalities of the various characters come across very clearly and the details you write makes the scene come alive.
The chat with the other world was an interesting twist. It sets up future postings very nicely.
Thank you.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Thanks, Friday, for coming into the middle of things. Among other things it's helping me trace my emotional journey.
Comment from Donya Quijote
How did you feel about finding out how frisky your parents were? I've heard my students talk about the PDA between their parents. They pronounce it gross and wrinkle their noses, even when the PDA leads to the bedroom and nine months later they have a sibling. I wonder if they know how we adults feel about them when we are witnesses to their groping and pawing and those dreamy looks. Stupid cupid has been flying around and shooting his wayward arrows and hitting even the most unsuspecting. It does provide some laughs but mostly it is annoying.
I found no nits this time, aren't you happy about that!?
Seems like your mom's moved brought you some peace and allowed you to get to feeling more like yourself. So, your mom's room became your defense against snoring and other annoying noises made by Frank. Speaking of the devil, how is he doing these days?
So, your interest in the world beyond if it exists was fostered by your mother. Did she ever contact you? I find the stories very interesting by I am no means a believer. The last medium or see I went to in support of a friend who wanted to go told me I would be a writer and good one. Ha! Also that I would find the things I am seeking. It would help to know what those things were/are? You must tell more about your experiences with these things. Curious, and you already got my attention.
Did your mother regret moving into the home? When did her talk of the end begin? Or had it always been there? I have heard that when the old folks go into places like that that there is this sense that they are one step closer to the grave than they were before. Decline comes quickly there after. My grandmother said that those are places where people go to die. When she went to one, it wasn't long before she was gone. I don't know...
Wow! What a surprise at the end, seemingly so. I mean was it really a surprise? Were you disappointed that their relationship led to wedding bells? How's your relationship now? Other than distance, from what you have shared, I'm sure it's not much different than most relationships these days.
Waiting for more...
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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How did you feel about finding out how frisky your parents were? I've heard my students talk about the PDA between their parents. They pronounce it gross and wrinkle their noses, even when the PDA leads to the bedroom and nine months later they have a sibling. I wonder if they know how we adults feel about them when we are witnesses to their groping and pawing and those dreamy looks. Stupid cupid has been flying around and shooting his wayward arrows and hitting even the most unsuspecting. It does provide some laughs but mostly it is annoying.
I found no nits this time, aren't you happy about that!?
Seems like your mom's moved brought you some peace and allowed you to get to feeling more like yourself. So, your mom's room became your defense against snoring and other annoying noises made by Frank. Speaking of the devil, how is he doing these days?
So, your interest in the world beyond if it exists was fostered by your mother. Did she ever contact you? I find the stories very interesting by I am no means a believer. The last medium or see I went to in support of a friend who wanted to go told me I would be a writer and good one. Ha! Also that I would find the things I am seeking. It would help to know what those things were/are? You must tell more about your experiences with these things. Curious, and you already got my attention.
Did your mother regret moving into the home? When did her talk of the end begin? Or had it always been there? I have heard that when the old folks go into places like that that there is this sense that they are one step closer to the grave than they were before. Decline comes quickly there after. My grandmother said that those are places where people go to die. When she went to one, it wasn't long before she was gone. I don't know...
Wow! What a surprise at the end, seemingly so. I mean was it really a surprise? Were you disappointed that their relationship led to wedding bells? How's your relationship now? Other than distance, from what you have shared, I'm sure it's not much different than most relationships these days.
Waiting for more...
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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So many questions! I've one for you. What does PDA stand for?
I don't know if that's how the wine spilled, just taking literary license here.
I went back and forth a lot of times to get rid of nits. :-)
Frank is on a plateau now where his memory loss and diabetes are concerned. But we both have bad head colds!
Mom did contact me several times. I wrote about it, but will summarize again when the time comes.
As for mediums, I've had some poor readings. The majority are frauds that pick up on body language. The real deals have waiting lists and are pricey. You Are a good writer. And maybe you have what you are seeking--a good job, devoted students- or am I reaching. If you want a man in your life I can give you some feng shui advice on that.
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Public display of affection--PDA
Comment from Tatarka2
I got a little lost in the beginning, but I think that's because this is a chapter in a longer book. My confusion was around the homes in which Mom has lived, how the decision was made for her to live at Ashton Gardens, and the relationships between the aunt and the mother. I'm sure this will be cleared up as I read further. I commend you, both for your loving care of your mother, and for writing this down in such a caring, descriptive manner. Many, many others, who are struggling with similar issues, will read this and be encouraged.
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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I got a little lost in the beginning, but I think that's because this is a chapter in a longer book. My confusion was around the homes in which Mom has lived, how the decision was made for her to live at Ashton Gardens, and the relationships between the aunt and the mother. I'm sure this will be cleared up as I read further. I commend you, both for your loving care of your mother, and for writing this down in such a caring, descriptive manner. Many, many others, who are struggling with similar issues, will read this and be encouraged.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Yes, there are 23 chapters before this. Small wonder you were lost. Go back and read the top line summary. That should help. I hope you're right about this inspiring others. Thanks again for taking time to read and review. I'm playing catch-up today.
Comment from alexisleech
It sounds as though your mother's move turned out for the best. We all need our own space, and it sounds as though you got on better as a result.
I bet your jaw dropped when you received the call from Nichole, and not in a good way. I look forward to finding out what happened next.
Alexis x
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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It sounds as though your mother's move turned out for the best. We all need our own space, and it sounds as though you got on better as a result.
I bet your jaw dropped when you received the call from Nichole, and not in a good way. I look forward to finding out what happened next.
Alexis x
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Glad you commented on the last line. There went my hope she would find someone who didn't have a Peter Pan syndrome!