Little Poems
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Comment from Jacob Collins
I thought that you captured the scene in the photograph well with this piece, treischel. There is a good use of imagery and description particularly with: The Mississippi River shimmers in the light, Bright business building glimmers, its reflection glows. An excellent piece...Jacob
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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I thought that you captured the scene in the photograph well with this piece, treischel. There is a good use of imagery and description particularly with: The Mississippi River shimmers in the light, Bright business building glimmers, its reflection glows. An excellent piece...Jacob
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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Thank you Jacob for a wonderful review.
